Working with Ministers: A practical handbook on advising, briefing

Working with Ministers

A practical handbook on

advising, briefing & drafting

A new edition of the handbook written by Christopher Jary

now revised by the original author

with Laura Bryant-Smith of the Policy Profession Support Unit

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0-9536688-2-7

Sixth Edition

Published January 2015

First edition published May 2004

Second edition published May 2005

Third edition published October 2006

Fourth edition published March 2008

Fifth edition published July 2011

This edition published November 2014

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Contents 
Introduction to this guide  7 
Chapter 1: Ministers and civil servants:  
Characteristics, roles and relationships  9 
Chapter 2: The Private Office  30 
Chapter 3: How to brief a minister  38 
Chapter4:Howtodraftministers’letters  56 
Chapter 5: How to draft answers to   
Parliamentary Questions  70 
Chapter6:Howtowriteministers’speeches  95 
 
 
Chapter 7: Civil Service ethics in practice  119 
Appendix 1:  The Civil Service Code  134 
Appendix 2: Extracts from the Ministerial Code  141 
Appendix 3: Extracts from the  Code of Conduct  
for Special Advisers  149 
Annex A: Ministerial Code:   
The Seven Principles  of Public Life  153 
 
 
Index  155 
 

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A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 5

Acknowledgements

In these matters, as in

everythingelse,we’reall

standingoneachother’s

shoulders. Many colleagues,

knowingly or not, have

contributed to this handbook.

Many of the ideas that follow

have been stolen shamelessly

over the years from friends and

colleagues of all kinds: civil

servants, ministers, MPs and

political scientists or observers.

These include, in no sort of

order at all:

Max Atkinson, Susan Jones,

Alan Wren, Hugh Lennon,

Andrew Wyatt, John Fuller,

John Cannon, Graham Davey,

Joe Kennedy, Amanda Bausor,

Lois Lightfoot, David Revolta,

Clare Shaw, Derek Cannons,

Trevor Tucknutt, Alyson Fender,

Martyn Waring, the late Peter

Morrison, Geoffrey Holland,

Roger Dawe, Barry Sutlieff,

Barnaby Shaw, Michael Howard,

Anne-Marie Lawlor, David

Blunkett, Margaret Hodge,

Nigel Forman, Jeremy Corbyn,

Michael Meacher, Terry Burns,

Peter Hennessy, Dennis

Kavanagh, Dicky Bird, Sean Lusk,

Paul Grant, Jane Foulsham,

Heather Todd, Michael Partridge,

Tony Shaw, Helena Charlton,

Francis Coxhead, Zoe McNeill-

Ritchie, Richard Jackson,

Chris Carr, Michael Duggett and

Brian Whalley.

Some of them – Sean Lusk, David

Revolta, Richard Jackson, Chris

Carr, Anne-Marie Lawlor,

Michael Meacher, Sir Michael

Partridge and Paul Grant – read

the original book in draft and

made helpful and encouraging

suggestions.

When Working with Ministers

first appeared in 2004 the United

Kingdom had not experienced

coalition government since July

1945, e-mail was far from

universal, Facebook was unheard

of and tweets concerned only

sparrows. This new edition

required revision to encapsulate

the changes of the last decade.

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It owes a great deal to the

interest and involvement of

Richard Banks, Chris Wormald,

Oliver Letwin, Charlotte

McKeown, Jacob Soper, Gabriel

Milland, Stephen Muers,

Alex Knight and Philippa Stroud.

Laura Bryant-Smith played a star

part in producing this sixth

edition – which is why her name

appears on its cover.

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Introduction to this guide

Serving ministers can be

exhilarating and rewarding.

Advising the Government of the

day to help improve the lives of

British citizens is an important and

demanding job. It can also be

bewildering and frustrating when

roles,relationshipsandministers’

requirements are unclear.

This handbook offers practical

guidance for those advising

ministers. It includes:

briefing orally and in writing

(including writing

submissions);

drafting replies to ministerial

correspondence

(Ministers’CasesandTreat

Officially Cases);

drafting replies to written and

oral Parliamentary Questions;

and

drafting ministerial speeches.

We hope it will be a useful

supplement to formal training and

yourdepartment’swritten

guidance.

The effective performance of any

of these tasks depends upon our

having a clear understanding of

our role as civil servants,

ministers’roles,theroleofspecial

advisers and the correct

relationship between us all. It also

requires a practical grasp of what

ministers need, based on a

sympathetic appreciation of the

pressures and demands they face.

The first chapter therefore

examines roles, relationships and

the pressures on ministers while

the second describes the hub of

these activities: private office.

The principles governing the

working relationships around

ministers are described in the Civil

Service Code, the Ministerial Code

and the Code of Conduct for

Special Advisers, which appear as

appendices to this guide. These

codes highlight the importance

Parliament attaches to an orderly

and transparent process of

government, to accountability at

all levels of responsibility and to a

politically impartial Civil Service.

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Successive governments have

been committed to improving the

quality of public services while

maintaining the traditional

principles and relationships on

which the Civil Service was

founded. The final chapter

therefore tries to interpret, from

an individualcivilservant’s

perspective, what those principles

mean in practice in our daily lives

serving ministers.

A personal recommendation from

me is that it may be helpful,

before embarking on any of the

tasks described in Chapters III to

VI, to have read Chapters I, II and

VII, which provide the background

to how and why we do things as

we do.

Christopher Jary

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Chapter 1: Ministers and civil servants:

Characteristics, roles and relationships

The government environment is

inhabited by two quite different

species, ministers and civil

servants, who enjoy a symbiotic

relationship. Good government

depends on the differences

between them: on the

characteristics of one balancing

those of the other. Ministers

bring to Whitehall democratic

legitimacy and accountability,

political direction and a

common-sense approach to

government. Civil servants bring

expertise, specialist knowledge,

objective advice and continuity.

The differences between the two

species can, however, lead to

misunderstandings, confusion

andfrustration.It’suptocivil

servants to bridge any gap.

While it is helpful if ministers

understand the needs of their

civilservants,it’sessentialthat

civil servants understand the

needs of ministers.

Unless we can make that

imaginative leap to see the world

fromaminister’sperspective,

we cannot help them discharge

the exacting duties upon which

successful government depends.

Although every individual is

unique, and generalisations are

dangerous, this chapter tries to

identify some of the more

common characteristics of

ministers and civil servants, to

examine their roles in

government and to explore the

relationship between them.

“Whileitishelpfulifministers

understand the needs of their

civilservants,it’sessentialthat

civil servants understand

theneedsofministers.”

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Ministers

Because a department is headed

by a political chief – a Secretary

of State – and an official – the

Permanent Secretary – who

manages the department,

responsibility for leadership is

less clearly allocated than it is in

most organisations.

Instead, it is shared between

them in a relationship that is

unique to government.

There are many things ministers

can do, but there are three

things they must do:

settheirdepartments’

strategic direction;

make policy decisions; and

present and account for

policy publicly and in

Parliament.

Whileministers’prioritiesvary,

froma‘typical’secretaryof

state’sperspective the world

may look roughly like this:

Family and friends

Ministers are human. Most have

husbands, wives, partners and

children, and the demands of their

ministerial, parliamentary, party

andconstituencylivesdon’tallow

them to spend as much time with

them as most would wish.

Although this is a side of their lives

we barely glimpse, it helps if civil

servants understand the sacrifices

ministers and their families are

often making.

The Prime Minister

Ministers are appointed and

dismissed by the Prime Minister,

who maintains a keen interest in

how they perform the duties they

have been given. Without the

PrimeMinister’scontinuedtrust

and support, a minister cannot

function. In some circumstances –

especially but not exclusively

when there is a coalition

government – the Deputy Prime

Minister may also play an

influential role in deciding what

particular departments can and

cannot do.

Ministers will also be acutely

aware of the Chancellor of the

Exchequer’scontrolofthepurse

strings: money often dictates what

can and cannot be done.

The party

First and foremost, ministers are

politicians. They became

politicians because they believe in

the broad set of political principles

espoused by a particular party. If

they are Members of the House of

Commons, it is because that party

originally adopted them as

candidate for a constituency. Now,

as senior members of their party,

they will be expected to continue

to play a prominent part in party

meetings, committees and

engagements.

They must also attend

parliamentary votes and pay

attention to the party whips (the

business managers for each party

in Parliament).

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Constituents

Ministers must combine their

ministerial duties with those of an

ordinary constituency MP. Many

Fridays and most weekends will be

spent in their constituencies,

meetingconstituentsat‘surgeries’

and dealing with a range of

everyday problems, from housing

to immigration. They neglect their

constituencies at their peril: like

any other MP – as recent elections

have demonstrated – ministers

can lose their seats. But even

those with the safest seats

generally take constituency work

very seriously. The day-to-day

realityoftheirconstituents’lives

provides a sounding board for

policies dreamed up in Whitehall;

ministers can therefore often have

a better grasp than their policy

officials do of the likely public

reaction to a new proposal,

programme or policy.

Special Advisers

Ministers need political advice as

well as advice from their civil

servants. Special advisers help

provide this.

Sometimes known as Spads, they

attend some meetings with

ministers and officials and receive

copies of most important

documents sent to their minister.

They may comment on these

documents, including submissions,

but their Code of Conduct forbids

them to ...suppress or supplant the

advice being prepared for

ministers by permanent civil

servants.

Aminister’srelationshipwitha

special adviser is often a close

one. Special advisers are often

used as sounding boards for ideas.

They are often well-informed and

their opinions can help policy civil

servants as well as ministers. They

have a valuable role in helping

ministers present the political

aspects of policy and often work

closely with speechwriters and

press officers.

Secretaries of State usually have

two special advisers. Some

Ministers of State have them, but

most ministers below Cabinet rank

do not.

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Parliament

As Members of Parliament,

ministers are expected to attend

frequently, to be available to their

fellow MPs and to support their

colleagues. The demands of

Parliament often considerably

lengthen their already demanding

working hours.

Ministers are constantly being

watched and judged by other MPs,

who judge them on what they see:

their performance at the despatch

box and in front of Select

Committees, their responses to

their Parliamentary Questions and

their answers to letters, often on

behalf of otherMPs’ constituents.

A fluent, persuasive and effective

performance on the floor of the

Houseincreasesaminister’s

standing; a lacklustre, uncertain or

hesitant one – however

competent the minister may be

within a department – can

damage a political career.

Similarly, because ministers sign

departmental replies to letters

from fellow MPs, their reputations

in Parliament will be improved or

damaged by the quality of those

replies. MPs will be impressed by

prompt, sympathetic, literate and

helpful responses to their

constituents’letters;theywillbe

annoyed by late, unhelpful,

unsympathetic letters containing

jargon or grammatical errors.

Their approval or disapproval will

be directed towards the minister

who signed them.

In no circumstances must a

minister mislead Parliament.

Special care must therefore be

taken over any statements to

Parliament. If we discover a

mistake of this kind, it is essential

to ensure that it is corrected at

once. Honest errors are

regrettable but inevitable; cover-

ups are unforgiveable.

The media

In a democracy, public opinion is

paramount. Ministers therefore

take very seriously the job of

communicating their policies to

the public. This is done largely

through the media, which used to

mean newspapers, radio and

television, but a major change in

recent years has been the growth

of social media.

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News cycles used to be measured

in discreet 24-hour increments.

But social media sources have

compressed this to the point

where it is perhaps more accurate

to speak of a news stream instead.

This stream can be turned on in an

instant, at any time of the day or

night, by people outside the

traditional media: a celebrity, a

well-known blogger or even

unknown members of the public

sitting in their bedrooms.

Responding to this is different and

more difficult because the

traditional tools of rebuttal and

argument are harder to deploy

than against a distributed

network. This can be complicated

by ministers often having their

own social media presence which

they may spend time creating and

maintaining.

Ministers still care greatly about

the traditional media. It is worth

remembering that, while an article

in the Financial Times may be read

by just a few thousand people, a

three-minute interview on Radio

4’sToday programme may reach 4

million and a five-second clip on

BBC’s10O’ClockNewswill be

seen by 6.6 million. On broadcast

media, the soundbite is a powerful

weaponinanyminister’sarmoury

and ministers know the value of a

point made with precision and

punch. Verbosity and jargon of

any kind are the enemies of

effective communication.

All governments feel under

constant pressure to respond

quickly and effectively to breaking

news at any time of day or night.

The handling of government

announcements has therefore

become almost as important as

their content. Ministers have a

leading role in handling and

controlling communications with

the media. Special advisers often

play a part in this, while

departmental press officers and

information divisions must

maintain close contacts with

journalists and answer their

enquiries.

Officials not in a press office

should avoid talking directly to

journalists, whose enquiries

should be directed to the press

office. If a media briefing is

needed, a press officer will usually

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accompany and advise the official

concerned. Policy officials dealing

with subjects that become a

matter of public or media concern

should consult and work closely

with their colleagues in the press

office.

“Ministers know the value of

a point made with precision

and punch.”

Cabinet

Cabinet meets only once a week

(when Parliament is sitting) for

about an hour. Most decisions are

therefore taken either in Cabinet

Committee, by groups of ministers

or by individual ministers within

departments. To resolve any

cross-party policy concerns within

government, the Coalition

Government of 2010 also

introduced a new body at the top

of government: the Quad includes

the Prime Minister, Deputy Prime

Minister, Chancellor of the

Exchequer and Chief Secretary to

the Treasury.

The Ministerial Code (see

Appendix 2) describes the

principle of collective

responsibility which ministers

must uphold. All decisions must be

considered and authoritative so

that the Government as a whole

can properly accept responsibility

for them. Decisions reached by

Cabinet and Ministerial

Committee are explicitly binding

on all members of the

Government, and the formal

convention is that they are not

allowed to disagree in public on

Government decisions.

It is expected of ministers –

especially Cabinet ministers – that

they should be able to speak

authoritatively not only about the

work of their own department,

but also about the broad range of

Government policy. Thus, a

Secretary of State for Transport

interviewedonBBCRadio4’s

Today programme may be asked

about the M25 but, depending

upon other recent news items, the

interview may then turn to VAT

rates, foreign affairs, education or

the National Health Service. Any

minister will be expected to speak

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knowledgeably about these and

countless other subjects.

Ministers’memories are therefore

full of facts and opinions unrelated

to the departments they head.

The department

Although some appointments, like

Chancellor of the Exchequer, have

special titles, there are essentially

three ranks of ministers:

Secretary of state

the senior minister in a

department who usually sits

in Cabinet.

Minister of state

a middle-ranking minister

who is not usually in Cabinet.

Parliamentary under secretary

of state (sometimes called

parliamentary secretary) a

junior minister who is not in

Cabinet.

The number and distribution of

ministers of state and

parliamentary under secretaries of

state vary between departments,

depending on the size of the

department and the distribution

of responsibilities within it.

Every secretary of state and some

ministers of state also have a

parliamentary private secretary

(PPS) who, although unpaid

beyond their pay as MPs, are in

some ways treated as members of

the Government. Their role is to

protecttheirministers’interestsin

Parliament and to keep them in

touch with Government

backbenchers.

In this country, unlike others,

ministers are seldom appointed to

a particular department because

they have an expertise or even a

long-standing interest in its work.

The Rt Hon. Eric Pickles MP was

unusual, as an ex-leader of a city

council, in being Secretary of State

at the Department for

Communities and Local

Government. The majority of

ministers are not experts in the

portfolios to which they are

appointed. They are not meant to

be. Just as the magistrate is

appointed to bring a common-

sense,layman’sapproachto

administering justice, the legal

expertise being provided by the

clerk of the court, so the minister

is appointed to bring a

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common-sense,layman’sand

political approach to government

with expert advice provided by

civil servants. Ministers are, of

course, free to call in advice from

other sources, and regularly do so.

These sources include not only

special advisers but also political

colleagues, think-tanks, interest

groups and journalists.

Because ministers can be moved

or removed with no notice there is

inevitably a temptation to pursue

policies which will bear fruit

before they move on. The

pressures in any democratic

system can militate against long-

term planning. Many ministers

resist such temptations and

pressures, but some are criticised

for‘short-termism’.

“Ministersrelyoncivilservantsto

provide the detailed information

necessary for them to make

informeddecisions.”

Ministers’workrequiresthemin

the course of a single day to jump

from a constituency matter to a

party meeting to a departmental

speaking engagement to a

Parliamentary appearance, each

interspersed with a range of

meetings and briefings covering

the spectrum of their

department’sresponsibilities.Life

is varied, demanding and usually

conducted at a hectic pace in

which major decisions may have

to be taken very quickly. Because

of these many and varied

demands, and because they are

usually not experts in the work of

their departments, their approach

to their duties tends to be broad-

brush.

They rely on civil servants to

provide the detailed information

necessary for them to make

informed decisions. To survive,

however, ministers must be able

to pick up knowledge very rapidly

and some are capable of

assimilating and retaining

astonishing amounts of detail.

Many ministers become steeped

in the work of their departments

in remarkably short order.

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The following model divides the

policy environment into three

parts. Successful ministers must

operate effectively in all three.

Although civil servants may feel

more at home in the middle part,

we too need to be able to operate

in the other two parts. We need to

understand and help to explain

the big picture of which our policy

is a part, and we need to

understand the effect of our policy

on members of the public.

When describing a policy – in

publicity leaflets, speeches, PQ

replies, letters or briefings to

ministers – we need to explain its

purpose, describe its effect on

people and explain how it works.

A working knowledge of the

practical level equips policy civil

servants with a solid grasp of how

the policy they understand

theoretically is working in the real

world.

Why?

• Philiosophy, aims,

beliefs, ideal,

principles, vision

• Politics - which asks:

'why are we doing

this?'

• Broad policy - which

shows where this

policy fits into the

Government's

position

How?

Policies:

• strategies

• objectives

• targets

• frameworks

• pilots and iterative

improvement

• collaboration

• action plans

• budgets

What, for whom?

Change, or a result,

in the real world

affecting real British

citizens

e.g. a new residential

home with room for

Mrs Jones of

Kidderminster

The Policy Skills and Knowledge

Framework is a widely

recognised guide describing the

role and responsibilities of a

policy official. It explains the

importance of bringing together

politics, evidence and delivery

into advice to ministers. The skill

of bringing these together is

perhaps the most crucial aspect

for policy officials; it

distinguishes their work from

delivery or evidence specialists,

whose advice they must present

as part of the bigger picture

upon which ministers rely.

Ministers often work under

considerable pressure. Much of

their paperwork is done very

early in the morning or very late

at night, when they are working

against the clock and are very

tired.

Aminister’sredbox(containing

thenight’sorweekend’s

homework) may include:

submissions and briefings on a

wide range of subjects; letters to

check and sign; draft speeches

and replies to Parliamentary

Questions to approve; and

Cabinet and Cabinet Committee

papers and minutes. (See the list

on page 35.) Their civil servants

can ease the pressure by

providing information which

includes everything the minister

needs to know to make sound

decisions and which is accurate,

brief and clear.

In summary, ministers:

are guided by a particular

set of political beliefs;

tend to take a broad-brush

approach to the work of

their department but often

need to master detail to

make decisions;

are required to give fair

consideration and due

weight to objective advice

from politically impartial

civil servants as well as to

politics

delivery evidence

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other considerations and

advice, but should

themselves make all

significant policy decisions;

have a loyalty to the Prime

Minister, to the government

and to their party, in which,

as ministers, they are senior

figures;

are accountable to

Parliament and take especial

care about their

appearances in the House

and the quality and speed of

theirrepliestoMPs’letters;

have a duty to continue to

represent their own

constituents as MPs;

are very sensitive to the

media and are keen to be

seen and heard often;

usually try to express their

views briefly, memorably

and orally, often arguing a

case rather than presenting

a more detached or written

exposition;

often work long hours,

balancing different demands

under great pressure; and

rely on their policy officials

to provide honest, robust

advice based on well-

grounded, up-to-date,

accurate information, to

know their stuff and to help

them to achieve their aims.

In contrast, civil servants:

are politically impartial,

serving any duly elected

government;

provide the expertise and

objective advice to enable

ministers to make decisions

based on the facts;

owe their first loyalty to

their ministers and must

obey their legitimate

instructions;

are accountable to ministers

and, through them, to

Parliament; (except for

expenditure – see page 123)

provide the permanent

element in government and

must command the trust of

the Opposition and other

parties;

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tend to take an objective,

unpolitical view of policy;

tend to be skilled written,

rather than oral,

communicators; and

tend to shrink from personal

publicity.

“Whicheverfunctiontheyare

fulfilling, civil servants are

expected to be politically

impartial, objective, honest and

loyaltotheirminister.”

There are about 440,000 civil

servants, carrying out three

broad functions:

helping ministers to decide

and present policy;

providing services to the

public; and

providing the corporate

support (finance, human

resources, IT etc) that

enables the Service to

function.

It’simportanttorememberthat

the majority of civil servants (in

the tax offices, benefit offices

and other executive agencies

delivering public services) are

engaged mainly in the second of

these functions. This handbook

concentrates on the work of the

first group: civil servants who

advise or draft for ministers.

Whatever their role, civil

servants are expected to be

politically impartial, objective,

honest and loyal to their

ministers. They may have their

own political views but these

should not influence the

professional advice they give to

ministers; nor should their own

views be publicly known. Civil

servants’authoritytoactinthe

public good is drawn through

ministers from Parliament. They

must also retain the confidence

of the Opposition, who must be

sure that the Civil Service would

serve them in government as

assiduously as it is serving the

present Government.

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Academic training and Service

culture encourage many of us to

pursue excellence in all we do.

Often this is a considerable

advantage: any policy and its

implications must be thoroughly

thought through before it is

implemented. Sometimes,

however, this tendency works

against us. Quality must be

balanced against deadlines;

exhaustiveness precludes

brevity. Saying or writing

something brief while capturing

all the crucial points is very

difficult. Often we have to be

ruthless in cutting back on the

detail, but there is no

alternative.It’snouse

producing a perfectly crafted

speech two days after the event,

or a comprehensive brief in

whichtheministercan’tfindthe

vital points.

Ontheseoccasionsthe‘good

enough’brieforthe‘good

enough’speechcanenableusto

include the essential points, to

express them clearly and simply

in a form the minister can use,

and still to meet the deadline.

The‘goodenough’conceptisnot

an excuse for reducing

standards;it’sapractical

approach to achieving the best

wecaninthetimewe’vegot. In

the fast-changing world of

ministers, 24-hour news and live

debate in social media, this is

often required.

Civil servants managing

colleagues who draft for

ministers have a crucial role to

train their staff by explaining any

corrections they make, using

them to show how any draft can

be improved. Track changes and

the correcting pen are not simply

short-termeditor’stools;they

are essential, long-term teaching

aids. Used constructively and

with sensitivity, they can help

less experienced colleagues to

follow in our footsteps by

understanding what ministers

need and learning how to

provide it.

Helping ministers to decide

policy

If decisions are often taken by

ministers who are not experts on

the subject, and have little time

A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 23

to dwell on any particular issue,

it is essential that they are based

on a firm foundation of fact. It is

the task of civil servants,

therefore, to supply the

expertise and to:

acquaint ministers as

objectively as possible with

the facts they need;

provide them with a range

of options;

give, and explain, a single,

clear recommendation;

warn of any dangers

inherent in any course of

action; and

loyally implement the

minister’sdecision.

While civil servants must

provide:

‘…advice to ministers on the

basis of the evidence, and

accurately present the options

andfacts…’

‘…ministers have

a duty to give fair

consideration and due weight

to informed and impartial

advice from civil servants.’

Civil Service Code (see Appendix 1)

Ministerial Code (see Appendix 2)

By nature, training and Service

culture, most civil servants are

more at ease with written than

oral communication. Whether

the information is conveyed on

paper or orally, however, the

civilservant’saimistoensure

that the minister has the best

advice possible, presented

objectively and based squarely

on the facts. Producing such

advice – in a form that also

meetstheminister’sneedfor

brevity and clarity – requires

judgement grounded in a

thorough understanding of the

subject. What must be included?

What can be left out of the

briefing?

The tension between the need

for full information and the need

for brevity can be resolved only

by the application of judgement

and inevitably, in some

circumstances, subsequent

events will prove that judgement

to have been wrong.

The most we can hope for is to

be right most of the time and

lucky with the consequences

whenwe’rewrong!(SeeChapter

3 for advice on this point.)

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Once a minister has been

briefed, a decision will be made

if one is required, although there

will often be considerations of

timing and handling about when

a decision is actually taken or

announced. As part of an elected

government, ministers have the

democratic authority to make

such decisions; civil servants do

not.

Ministers are accountable to

Parliament while civil servants,

who have no such democratic

legitimacy, cannot set their will –

however expert – against that of

their minister. Civil servants

must therefore implement

ministers’decisionswhether

they agree with them or not.

This can cause particular

difficulties for specialist civil

servants, who may believe their

professional judgement is being

overridden.

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The Civil Service Code highlights

the duty of departments and

agencies to consider the concern

of any civil servant who feels

he/she is being required to act in

a way which conflicts with the

Code. It recommends reporting

such concerns to line managers

or to the nominated officer (the

departmental official nominated

to deal with such matters).

Ultimately, matters of

conscience can be taken to the

Civil Service Commissioners who

are the final arbiter and who

report to Parliament on all cases.

(See Chapter 7 and Appendices 1

to 3 for more information on

professional ethics.)

Helping ministers to present

policy

Manyofministers’public

statements and most of their

letters are initially drafted by

civil servants. These include:

speeches at departmental

engagements and in

Parliament;

press releases and public

announcements;

replies to Parliamentary

Questions; and

departmental letters.

Because these are statements

for a minister to make or sign,

theymustreflecttheminister’s

own style and point of view.

They may therefore:

be political (insofar as they

are based on the policies of

the Government);

presenttheGovernment’s

policies and achievements in

the best possible light; and

include assertions as well as

facts.

Acivilservant’sroleistohelp

ministers argue their case as

convincingly as possible while

sticking to the facts. Although

assertions (for example, “Our

policy has been a tremendous

success.”) often feature in

ministers’speeches,anypieceof

information included in a draft

for a minister to say must be

based on firm evidence.

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This is of paramount importance

in any statement made to

Parliament. Facts will often be

presented as part of a political

argument and will be used to

advance the government’scase.

Because they reflect the policy of

a particular party (the party in

power), drafts of this kind are

clearly not in themselves

politically impartial; as civil

servants, our impartiality derives

from our capacity to serve the

Opposition in exactly the same

way, should they be elected to

government.

“Acivilservant’sroleistohelp

ministers argue their case as

convincingly as possible while

stickingtothefacts.”

In some circumstances ministers

may wish to criticise the

Opposition. While this is clearly a

legitimate thing for them (or for

their political advisers) to do, it is

not legitimate material for civil

servants to draft. If civil servants

are known to have been

preparing attacks on them, the

Opposition may lose confidence

in our capacity to serve them

when it is their turn to govern.

While it is clear that civil

servants should help ministers in

their role as departmental

ministers, and should play no

part in their roles as senior

figures in the party or as

constituency MPs, other lines are

less clearly drawn. An example

of work which lies on this

difficult boundary is when

ministers in government, wishing

to respond to a manifesto or

more in the style of a statement

than an answer to an oral

question. Like a reply to an oral

question, however, the draft

should be supported by a

background note and notes for

supplementaries.

Disproportionate cost

A minister may refuse to answer a

question on the grounds of

unreasonable or disproportionate

cost of researching the answer.

The disproportionate cost

threshold is now £850, but it is

revised from time to time.

Where it is decided that the cost

of answering a question would be

unacceptably high, an explanation

of why it is recommended that a

full answer should not be given is

submitted, together with a reply

on the following lines:

‘Informationintheformrequested

is not readily available and could

be obtained (compiled) only at

disproportionatecost.’

The precise form of words chosen

varies, according to the particular

circumstances. If it is possible to

answer some of the question

without incurring disproportionate

cost, do so.

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House of Lords

Most of the suggestions made in

this chapter apply to questions in

both Houses of Parliament. There

are, however, one or two

additional points to be watched

when preparing answers to

questions in the Lords. Answers

given in the House of Lords

normallystartwith‘MyLords’.

Lordsministers’initialanswers

should not generally exceed 75

words. Where an answer contains

material that is too lengthy or

complicated to be given orally in

the House, it may be published in

Hansard.

The briefing for supplementaries

and the background note have to

be sufficiently informative to

enable the minister to deal in a

fair measure of detail with a wider

range of supplementary questions

than usually arises in the

Commons. Briefing should also

take account of the fact that a

Lords minister may be less familiar

with the subject matter. (Fuller

notes on questions in the House of

Lords are given in Supplement 3 of

this chapter.)

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SUPPLEMENT 1: Guidance to Officials on Drafting Answers to

Parliamentary Questions

1.NeverforgetMinisters’obligationstoParliamentwhichareset

out in the Ministerial Code:

‘ItisofparamountimportancethatMinistersgiveaccurateand

truthful information to Parliament, correcting any inadvertent

error at the earliest opportunity. Ministers who knowingly mislead

Parliament will be expected to offer their resignation to the Prime

Minister. Ministers should be as open as possible with Parliament

and the public, refusing to provide information only when

disclosurewouldnotbeinthepublicinterest.’

2.Itisacivilservant’sresponsibilitytoMinisterstohelpthemfulfil

thoseobligations.ItistheMinister’srightandresponsibilityto

decide how to do so. Ministers want to explain and present

Government policy and actions in a positive light. Ministers will

rightly expect a draft answer that does full justice to the

Government’sposition.

3. Approach every question predisposed to give relevant information

fully, as concisely as possible and in accordance with guidance on

disproportionate cost. If there appears to be a conflict between the

requirement to be as open as possible and the requirement to

protect information whose disclosure would not be in the public

interest, you should consult your FOI liaison officer if necessary.

4. Where information is being refused on the grounds of

disproportionate cost, there should be a presumption that any of

the requested information which is readily available should be

provided. Find out more about web archiving at The National

Archives.

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5. Do not omit information sought merely because disclosure could

lead to political embarrassment or administrative inconvenience.

6. Where there is a particularly fine balance between openness and

non-disclosure, and when the draft answer takes the latter course,

thisshouldbeexplicitlydrawntotheMinister’sattention.

Similarly, if it is proposed to reveal information of a sort which is

notnormallydisclosed,thisshouldbeexplicitlydrawntoMinisters’

attention. The Minister should also be advised of any relevant FOI

cases which are under consideration which could impact on the

way the PQ should be answered.

7. If you conclude that material information must be withheld and

the PQ cannot be fully answered as a result, draft an answer which

makes this clear and explains the reasons, such as disproportionate

cost or the information not being available, or explains in terms

similar to those in the Freedom of Information Act (without

resorting to explicit reference to the Act itself or to section

numbers)thereasonfortherefusal.Forexample,‘Thereleaseof

thisinformationwouldprejudicecommercialinterests’.Takecare

to avoid draft answers which are literally true but likely to give rise

to misleading inferences.

8. Where an MP/Peer tables a question and has also submitted a

separate request to the department under FOI, it is reasonable to

reply in terms that the issue is currently under consideration. Once

a decision has been reached, the MP/Peer should be informed of

the answer and a copy of the letter placed in the Libraries of the

House. Consideration should also be given to a written ministerial

statement in both Houses.

82 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

9. Where a decision on an FOI case results in a change of policy and that

information which was previously withheld is now being released,

consideration should be given to informing both Houses, for example,

through written ministerial statement.

10. PQs should be answered within the normal deadlines. In the House of

Commons, a Named Day question should receive a substantive response

on the day named and an Ordinary Written question should receive a

substantive response within a working week of it being tabled. In the

House of Lords, questions for Written Answer are expected to be

answered within 14 days. Consideration of a parallel FOI request is not a

reason to delay an answer to a Parliamentary Question.

SUPPLEMENT 2: Questions in the House of Commons

Tabling questions

Written questions are handed in or sent to the Clerks in the Table Office

of the House of Commons. Each Member is restricted to no more than

two Questions for Oral Answer per day, and not more than one oral

question to any individual Minister per day. There is no limit to the

number of questions a Member may put down for ordinary written

answer,butMPsarerestrictedtoaskingamaximumoffive‘namedday’

PQs per day. The Parliamentary Intranet allows oral and written PQs to

be submitted electronically. Since 2006 MPs have been able to table

written questions during recess.

A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 83

Rules governing the form, content and minimum period of notice

Before a question can be placed on the Order Paper it must satisfy a

set of rules governing its content and form. For example, a question:

should either seek information or press for action; it should

not offer or seek expressions of opinion

must relate to a matter for which the minister to whom it is

addressed is responsible as a minister. It may not, for

example, touch on any activities in his or her capacity as a

party leader or Member

should not seek confirmation of or comment upon a report

or rumour for which a minister can have no responsibility

should be drafted as concisely as possible and conform to

normal Parliamentary conventions about decorous language

and respect for the Crown, judiciary and Members of both

Houses

may not touch any matter which is currently the subject of

legal proceedings (the sub judice rule i.e. where a civil action

is set down for a hearing, or a criminal case is between

charges preferred and final determination of sentence or

where any appeal has been lodged).

An additional rule governing oral questions precludes Members from

puttingdown‘open’questions,i.e.onesthatdonotsuggestthe

subject matter of the supplementary question. Only the Prime

Ministeraccepts‘open’questions.

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A question which has already been asked and fully answered

cannot normally be asked again for three months. Additionally,

there are subjects, such as the security services or matters of

commercial confidence, on which Ministers have consistently

refused to answer. The Table Office Clerks (who are servants of

Parliament, not civil servants) ensure that questions comply with

the rules of the House. They will advise a Member if a question

appears to breach a rule and on how it can be amended and

brought into order. With the exception of urgent questions

(formerly known as Private Notice Questions – see page 92), the

usual minimum lapse of time between handing in a question and

having it answered is three days.

Oral questions

MPs may table oral questions to a minister any time after the day

when that minister last answered questions in the House. Although

oral questions may therefore be tabled some weeks in advance of

the actual Question Time, they will not be published until after

1230 pm, three sitting days before the Question Time. Many more

questionsaretabledthanarepublished.A‘shuffle’ofalltheoral

PQs tabled produces a random list, usually of 25 PQs. (If more than

one department is answering questions on any particular day there

will be up to 30 PQs on the Order Paper.) It is therefore a matter of

chancebothwhetheranMP’squestiongetsontheOrderPaperat

all and, if it does, how high up it appears in the order of questions.

Oral questions are answered every weekday except Friday. Each

major department is allocated a particular day of the week for

answering oral questions. The allocation is shown on the Order of

Questions which is issued as soon as the dates of the next recess

are known. The departments will normally have to answer oral

questions once every five weeks during the Session, except oral

A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 85

questions to the Prime Minister which take place weekly for 30

minutes at noon on Wednesdays. As well as specific oral questions,

MPs can also ask topical questions of ministers. For departments

that answer for the full hour of question time, the last fifteen

minutes are reserved for topical questions. For those answering for

less than an hour, the time allocated to topical questions will be

proportionately shorter.

Questions for ordinary written answer

Ordinary written questions have a date for earliest answer; the

convention is that Government departments should reply within a

working week of that date.

Questions for answer on a named day

These questions have to receive an answer on the date specified

even if only of a holding type.

Arranged questions

‘ArrangedPQs’(or‘inspired’PQsastheyaresometimesknown)

are now rarely asked in either House. They have generally been

replaced by written ministerial statements which are published in

the daily Hansard. Major policy announcements will normally be

made in oral statements in the House.

Question Time

Question time lasts for one hour, irrespective of how many

questions on the Order Paper have been reached. Departmental

ministers have to answer questions once every five weeks when

Parliament is sitting. On most days, one department will be

answering questions for the full hour but, on Wednesdays,

86 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

when the Prime Minister also answers questions, the time allotted

to the particular department is from just after 11.30 to 12 noon.

Smaller departments and other bodies who answer questions

answer for shorter periods of time on some Thursdays.

Question Time – procedure

The Speaker calls successively each Member in whose name a

question appears on the Order Paper. The Member called rises and

asks the question by stating its number on the Order Paper, for

example:‘Number8’.(TheMemberdoesnotreadoutthetextof

the question since it is printed on the Order Paper and time is

saved by calling the number only.). Members who are not present

to call out the question number, or whose question is not reached,

will receive a written reply.

If, however, a group of related questions is taken together, one

oral reply is given to all the questions in that particular group as

long as one of the Members is present when the question is called.

After the minister has read out the prepared answer, the Speaker

allows the Member who asked the question, and normally other

Members from both sides of the House, to put supplementary

(follow-up) questions to the minister. The scope of

supplementaries is limited only by the rule that they have to arise

from the original question. At some point in the proceedings the

Speaker will normally call a front bench Opposition spokesperson

toputasupplementary.TheSpeakerwillnotcallaMember’sPQif

he or she has already asked a supplementary.

Supplementary questions are answered impromptu by the minister

on the basis of briefing provided by the department in notes for

supplementaries. The number of supplementaries allowed is

entirely at the discretion of the Speaker.

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Topical Oral Questions

For topical questions, the opening question is in the standard

format of: To ask the Secretary of State if he/she will make a

statement on his/her departmental responsibilities. The Secretary

of State briefly answers the question, addressing the major issues

of the day. Supplementary questions on any area of the Secretary

ofState’sdepartmentalresponsibilitiesarethenaskedbothby

members successful in the ballot and by others who are called by

theSpeaker(ratherlikeatPrimeMinister’sQuestions).

Questions taken together - grouping

Very similar or identical questions, particularly oral questions, are

often put down by two or more Members. This happens because

Members wish to ask a question about the same subject, or wish

to try to ensure that a question on the subject comes out in the

shuffle. When this happens the questions may be grouped

together with the minister giving a single answer to all of them.

This may save some time in the House and also provide the

minister with an opportunity for tactical advantage during

Question Time. It is the minister, often advised by officials, who

decides which questions will be taken together, and from how far

down the list he or she will select questions for grouping, subject

to the agreement of the Speaker. Advancing PQs from too far

down the list is not regarded as acceptable. For example, similar

questions may appear, say, as Numbers 2, 7, 11 and 20. In deciding

which to group, the minister will have in mind not only the number

of questions the ministerial team will be able (or wish) to answer

during a particular Question Time but also the Members putting

the questions.

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Theusualformulaforgroupedoralquestionsis‘Ishall,with

permission, Mr Speaker, answer this question and question(s)

Number(s)... together’.Theministerthengivesasingleanswertoall

the questions in the group. Following the answer the Speaker usually

calls first and successively for supplementaries those Members

whose questions have been answered together.

When questions down for written answer are answered together,

each question is typed in full, in the order tabled, followed by the

reply. There is no introductory sentence stating that they are being

answered together. It is not customary to group written answers for

more than one Member, but this is done occasionally. It is contrary

to current practice to group for answer a written question with an

oral question. Oral questions to the Prime Minister are not grouped

for answer.

PrimeMinister’sQuestions

The Prime Minister answers questions orally every Wednesday

during the Session between 12 noon and 12.30 pm. Most questions

ask him to list his engagements for the day (only the first of which is

printed). These open questions are so drafted to avoid the question

being transferred to another minister. The PM has overall

responsibility for the whole range of Government, overlapping with

the responsibilities of each and every other minister, but he or she

has few specific responsibilities. The open question hides the real

question and gives an element of surprise to supplementary

questions. These supplementaries are usually on matters which are

topical on the day the question is answered.

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ThePrimeMinisterdoesn’tactuallyanswertheengagement

question, except for the first time that it is asked. For question

Number 2 onwards, the MP comes straight in with the

supplementary. MPs who have tabled questions - whether open or

specific - are allowed one supplementary question. The Leader of

the Opposition is allowed to intervene six times.

Urgent questions (formerly known as Private Notice Questions and

still known as PNQs in the Lords)

The minimum period of notice of a question may not be

appropriate in the case of an emergency or important unexpected

development. In such circumstances, any Member may apply to

the Speaker for permission to ask an urgent question of the

responsibleminister.Thusan‘urgentquestion’isaquestionwhich

hasnotappearedontheOrderPaperbutwhich,intheSpeaker’s

opinion, raises an urgent matter of public importance. Urgent

questions can be asked of any department on any sitting day.

The Speaker then holds a business meeting at which it is decided if

anyurgentquestionsshouldbeallowed.TheSpeaker’sdecision,

which is final, is immediately conveyed to the department. No

reasons for the decision are given either to Members or to the

department. In coming to a decision, the Speaker has to keep in

mind the fact that any urgent questions allowed will be answered

immediately after normal Question Time, or at 11.00 am on

Fridays. They thus occupy a privileged position and also take time

out of the main business for that day. In 2003-4, only 12 urgent

questions were asked. Applications for urgent questions are

confidential and no public reference should be made to any

application which has been turned down.

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The Member concerned asks the urgent question by reading out

the text of the question. When the minister has read out the

prepared answer, the Speaker allows supplementary questions, as

with normal oral PQs. On average 10 to 15 minutes are allowed for

an urgent question. If an urgent question is allowed, arrangements

may be made to have the answer repeated in the House of Lords.

SUPPLEMENT 3: Questions in the House of Lords

ProceduresfordealingwithLords’Questionsfollowasimilar

pattern to those in the Commons, although there are differences in

their form, and in the way in which they are answered. Overall

there are fewer questions in the House of Lords than in the House

of Commons. However, while the number of Questions for Oral

Answer is fixed (currently at 18 a week), the number of Questions

for Written Answer has risen dramatically in recent years.

Tabling questions

Questions are handed in or sent to the Clerks in the Minute Room

of the House of Lords, who advise Members on wording and

admissibility. The practice of the House is that questions, whether

oral or written, should be short, and framed to elicit information.

Statements of opinion are out of order, and statements of fact are

included only so far as is necessary to elicit the desired

information. Most questions tabled in the Lords are addressed to

HerMajesty’sGovernmentandnottoanyparticularministeror

department.

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QuestionsforOralAnswer,or‘starredquestions’,maybetabled

not more than one calendar month, and not less than 24 hours,

before the start of the sitting at which they are to be asked. This

means that in theory a question could appear for the first time on

the Lords Order Paper on the day for answer. However, because

spaces on the Order Paper are allocated to Members on a first-

come-first-served basis, in practice a reasonable period of notice is

usually given. The exception is topical questions, one of which is

asked on Mondays and Tuesdays, and two on Wednesdays, for

whichonlytwoworkingdays’noticeis given. No Member may

have more than one oral question on the Order Paper at any one

time, but topical questions, which are selected by ballot, do not

count for this purpose. Each Member may ask up to four topical

questions in any one Parliamentary Session.

Oral questions

Oral questions are taken in the Lords on Mondays, Tuesdays,

Wednesdays and Thursdays. 30 minutes are allowed for the four

oral questions asked each day. Supplementary questions may be

asked as they are in the Commons. They tend to be longer than in

the Commons, although the Procedure Committee of the House

has reminded Members that they should be short and confined to

not more than two points. If they are too long, ministers – who are

also encouraged to be succinct – may confine their answer to the

two main points. Supplementary questions may also range more

widely than is usual in the Commons, although again the Procedure

Committee has reminded Peers that supplementaries should be

relevant to the question on the Order Paper, and has urged

ministers not to answer irrelevant questions.

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Question Time

At Question Time, each Member who has put down an oral question

rises when called upon by the Clerk and begs leave of the House to

ask the question standing in his or her name on the Order Paper.

ThereisnoequivalentintheLordsoftheCommons’practice

whereby an oral question receives a written reply if it is not reached

or called. About eight minutes are allowed for each question, and

when this time is up the Leader of the House will, if necessary,

intervene to ensure that all questions are called within the 30 or 40

minutes.

Private Notice Questions

Private Notice Questions (PNQs) give Members the opportunity to

raise urgent matters on any sitting day. A PNQ should be submitted

to the Leader of the House by 12 noon on the day on which it is

proposed to ask it. (Different arrangements apply on days when the

House sits in the morning.) The decision on whether the question is

sufficiently urgent to require an immediate reply rests in the first

place with the Leader, though it is open to any Member whose

requesthasbeenturneddowntochallengetheLeader’spreliminary

decision on the floor of the House. The final decision rests with the

general‘sense’oftheHouse. PNQs are taken immediately after oral

questions, and procedures follow the same rules. Supplementary

questions may be asked, and should be short and confined to not

more than two points. Proceedings on a PNQ are expected to take

not more than 10 minutes in total. In certain circumstances it may

be more appropriate for the Government to make a statement on

the matter a PNQ is intended to raise.

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Written questions

Members may table up to six written questions on each sitting day.

The questions, like oral questions, are handed in or sent to the

Clerks in the Minute Room. The Clerks then allocate each question

to a department. When the House rises the questions tabled on

that day are e-mailed to Parliamentary Clerks in all departments.

Where a department believes that a question has been wrongly

allocated to it, it has until the end of the next working day to agree

a transfer to another department and to inform the Office of the

Leader of the House of Lords of this transfer.

Every effort must be made to ensure that a reply to a written

question appears in Hansard within five working days of the date

on which the question is tabled, although the formal time limit for

answering questions is 14 days. Where the answer is very long, a

copy may be placed in the Library of the House rather than printed

in Hansard.

Arranged questions

‘ArrangedPQs’(or‘inspired’PQsastheyaresometimesknown)

are now rarely asked in either House. They have generally been

replaced by written ministerial statements which are published in

the daily Hansard. Major policy announcements will normally be

made in oral statements in the House.

Questions for Short Debate (currently called Unstarred questions)

A Question for Short Debate is, in effect, more like a Commons

‘adjournmentdebate’thanaParliamentaryQuestion.Likeoral

questions, they are put down for a specific date, but they are not

prefixed on the Order Paper by an asterisk. They may be taken

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duringthe‘dinnerbreak’, in which case they are time-limited to one

hour, starting at around 7.30 pm, or the end of business, in which

case the time-limit is one and a half hours, starting whenever other

businesshasbeenconcluded.‘Dinnerbreak’questionsaremarked

on the Order Paper with a double dagger. Members tabling these

questionsnormallyconsulttheGovernmentWhips’Officeinthe

Lords to agree a suitable date.

A Question for Short Debate entitles the Member asking the

question to speak on the question at length; a debate then ensues,

which can include speeches from the Opposition and Liberal

Democrat front benches, and at the end the Government minister

replies. The Member asking the question has no right of reply and

there is no division, since there is no motion before the House. The

questioner is allotted 10 minutes, the minister 12 minutes, and the

remaining time is shared among the other speakers. The reply is

written in the form of a draft speech or speaking notes which

anticipate points the Member asking the question is expected to

raise. Where other Members indicate they will also be speaking in

the debate and the points that they intend to make are known, the

answers to these are also included in the speech or speaking notes.

Supplementary notes, in the form of short passages that can be

incorporated into a speech, are often provided on other points

which are less likely to come up and are not already covered.

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Chapter6:Howtowriteministers’

speeches

“Thepurposeofanyspeechisto

persuade or even inspire, and,

aboveall,toentertain.”

Why make speeches?

For most of us – even those who

speak frequently – giving a

speech is an ordeal. Very few

people enjoy making speeches,

and those who do are often the

last who should be invited to

make them! Even fewer enjoy

listening to speeches. Although

there are many exceptions, as a

rule speeches are usually too

long and much too boring. The

speechwriter should draw two

lessons from these simple truths:

Any draft should help the

speaker through the ordeal.

One must have mercy upon

the poor audience:

20 minutes is the maximum

recommended dose for average

adult audiences.

The purpose of any speech is to

persuade or even inspire, and,

above all, to entertain. The last

of these is the most important of

all because, if a speech fails to

holditsaudience’sattention,it

can achieve neither of its other

possible objectives. The one

unforgivable crime is to bore

one’saudience.

Audiences will generally listen

carefully to the first few

sentences of any speech. In

those few moments they will size

up the speaker and decide

whether the rest of the speech

will be worth listening to, or not.

If they decide not, they will tune

out and it will be hard to regain

their attention. Most speeches

fail in the first sentence by

beginning in a highly predictable

way.

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For example:

I am delighted to be here at CSL,

which is a key player in the

Government’soverarching

strategic training framework,

whose purpose is to develop a

suite of training and

development offerings which

enhanceitscustomers’ skills base

to bring value-added to the

delivery of their key programmes

and policies.

Because this is exactly the sort of

abstract nonsense most

audiences have learnt to expect,

having glanced at the speaker

and decided that nothing

memorable or interesting is

likely to follow, they will tune

out and think of more

entertaining things until the

speaker shows signs of winding

down.

However interesting the subject

and speaker, audience attention

will be at its peak at the

beginning and (providing the

speaker signals that it is coming)

the end of the speech. They are

therefore more likely to

remember the first and last

things the speaker says than

anything in the middle. This

provides some useful lessons for

the speechwriter, who should:

put any important

announcement either at the

beginning or end of the

speech;

pay most attention to the

drafting of the beginning

and the end than of the

middle; and

bury anything boring but

essential somewhere in the

middle.

No speech should deal with

more than three subjects and

ideally should stick to one. One-

subject speeches are perfectly

acceptable and often the most

effective.

Any speech should have a clear

objective. It should not, for

example, simply be about

foundation hospitals; it should

be written specifically to

persuade members of the British

Medical Association that

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foundation hospitals are a viable

policy.

Speeches are very poor vehicles

for informing – and especially for

communicating complex,

abstract or detailed information.

Audiences will remember only

the general point being made

and will seldom retain facts,

figures or detail. Speechwriters

should therefore restrict the

amount of information being

given to a few points and never

be too detailed or abstract in

their descriptions.

A speech is a powerful medium

to persuade or inspire an

audience. Speeches appeal to

theaudience’sears(likepoetry,

they must sound pleasing),

hearts (again like poetry, they

appeal to the emotions) and,

finally, reason, as the logic of any

argument follows the appeal of

sound and emotion. Big

inspirational speeches (like those

of Winston Churchill, David Lloyd

George or Martin Luther King)

represent the zenith of the art,

but opportunities for such an

approach come rarely. To try to

be inspirational when it is

inappropriate produces only

comic effect. But most

ministerial speeches aim to

persuade an audience in one

way or another, and

speechwriters should polish their

phrases carefully to ensure that

they please the ear, appeal to

the emotions and satisfy the

reason of their audience.

“Thespeechwriterneedsto

gauge the style and range of the

speaker.”

Time spent in research is

seldom wasted

Speeches have to be tailor-made

for the audience. Even if the

middle bits are off the peg, the

beginnings and ends will have to

be written specially and the rest

adapted to purpose. You cannot

expect to give the same speech

in Bradford as you gave in

Basildon.Ifyou’reinBradford,

you must make lots of

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references to Bradford and

ensure that your speech is of

interest to a Bradford audience.

Few things look ruder than a

speech which was clearly

written, with no thought to the

audience or venue, in a padded

cell in some government office in

London. But resist the

temptation to tell a Bradford

audience lots of things they

already know about their own

city. Try to personalise

comments, either by talking

about an experience the speaker

once had in Bradford or by

highlighting an interesting but

little-known local person, place

or event – especially if their story

supportsyourspeech’sthemeor

aim.

Speeches also have to be tailor-

made for the speaker. Some

speak quickly, some slowly;

some ad lib, some stick to the

prepared script; some are

confident, some terrified; some

are excellent speakers, most are

not. The speechwriter needs to

gauge the style and range of the

speaker. These can largely be

learnt only by trial and error but,

in the case of ministers, there

are some clues that may help

their speechwriters. Their

private offices may be able to

offer some hints on their styles

and preferences, and may be

able to provide examples of

speeches their ministers have

liked. If you can lay hands on a

copyofaminister’sspeechtohis

or her party conference, this is a

usefulindicationofaminister’s

personal style: they write these

speeches themselves.

As far in advance as possible, a

speechwriter should speak

personally to someone senior

who is organising the event. You

should then spend time

researching:

the nature and formality of

the event;

the size and nature of the

audience (and any VIPs);

who will precede, introduce

and follow the speaker and

what they will say;

what the audience want to

hear;

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the background of the host

organisation and venue;

the style and preferences of

the speaker;

the points the speaker will

want to make;

where the subjects fit with

broader Government policy;

and

anything unusual or

memorable about the event.

These factors will dictate what

sort of speech you will write. A

20-minute keynote speech for a

major national conference must

be different in tone from an

informal five-minute speech to a

small group of people in a village

hall; an after dinner speech

(when brevity and

entertainment are paramount)

will be different again.

Background information about

the event, audience and host

organisation may also provide

useful material for your speech

(which may link with the theme

you later choose) and help to

determine the tone you adopt.

Planning

At this stage it is a good plan to

agree with the speaker a one-

page, draft outline of what the

speech will include. This can save

the writer wasting effort

producing a speech on subjects

which the speaker does not wish

to cover.

For major ministerial speeches

you may sometimes have to fight

off serried ranks of colleagues

who are anxious to include a

passage about their own areas of

interest. As the speechwriter,

you must assume editorial

control and decide what fits, and

what does not fit, into the

speech; otherwise you will end

up with a speech that is too long,

too detailed and disconnected,

and which includes everything

but the kitchen sink.

As early as possible you should

also commission from colleagues

any contributions needed for the

speech. To avoid having to

rewrite contributions that are

too long, in lifeless Civil Service

prose, too technical or in the

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wrong style, you may wish to

invite contributions in the form

of bullet points. These can then

be woven into the speech in

sentences drafted by you and in

the order you choose. If you do

this, however, you should always

clear the draft with contributors

before it is finalised.

“Formajorministerialspeeches,

you may sometimes have to fight

off colleagues anxious to include

a passage about their own areas

ofinterest.”

To avoid last-minute chaos, it is

helpful to block out time in your

diary when you plan to write the

speech. Any writing is best done

in tranquillity; so choose a time

and place when you are least

likely to be interrupted and

when you feel most able to

concentrate on writing. Allow

plenty of time: writing is a time-

consuming process. A day

devoted to writing a 20-minute

speech is not excessive.

Between now and the time you

have decided to draft the

speech, mull it over and try to:

identify a theme that

connects the whole thing

together;

invent a beginning that

catchestheaudience’s

attention; and

choose a memorable

ending.

Time spent now pleasantly

thinking can prevent hours of

painful agonising later.

“Trytosoundlikeonehuman

being speaking fairly naturally to

others.”

Drafting

First lock yourself away. Writing

– especially creative writing,

which speechwriting most

certainly is – requires peace and

quiet. Open-plan offices may

have many advantages but

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tranquillity is not one of them.

Get away, if you possibly can,

from the bustle of your office.

Try to:

think yourself into the shoes

of the speaker and try to

sound like them;

picture the event itself and

the audience; and

write spoken, not written,

English.

Grabtheaudience’sattention

with the first few sentences and

don’tbeafraidofstartingoff the

subject, providing you link

credibly into the main subject

within the first two minutes.

Alternatively, you can pitch

straight into the main subject

with a controversial or

persuasive point about it. This

direct approach can often

provide an arresting start to a

speech.

Within the first minute or two

you should make a pleasant

reference to the audience,

venue, event or host, but, unless

it’sfunnyororiginalinsome

way,don’tstartwithit:that’s

exactly what the audience is

expecting and, when they hear

it, they will switch off and think

of lunch.

“Preciselyplacedcommas,

dashes and full stops guide the

speaker through the sense of

each sentence and enable them

to place their emphasis on the

right words andphrases.”

Your English should be correct,

informal, spoken English – not

necessarily in complete

sentences as few of us speak in

perfect sentences. Use clear,

punchy language, avoiding Civil

Servicese (e.g. secure, seek to,

maximise) and clichés (e.g. key

players, framework, level playing

field, customer). (See

Supplement 2.)

Make your sentences shorter

than you would in written

English: if your audience miss

something, they cannot go back

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and read the speech again. On

the other hand, too many very

short sentences make an

audience feel they are being shot

at. So vary the pace: when you

use a long sentence, follow it

with a short one.

Punctuation is important: not to

youortheaudience(whocan’t

hear it), but to the speaker.

Precisely placed commas, dashes

and full stops guide the speaker

through the sense of each

sentence and enable them to

place their emphasis on the right

words and phrases. In speeches,

we use punctuation slightly

differently from how we use it in

conventional written text. For

example, semi-colons have no

real value in a speech, while

colons can usually be replaced

with dashes. Commas, however,

show pauses and therefore really

help the speaker. The full stop

and the capital letter that

follows it highlight for the

speaker where a new sentence

starts.

Often we will break up a long

sentence into three short ones

which may, grammatically, not

besentencesatall.But,ifit’s

easier for the speaker to

comprehend and say them if

they are presented as three

separate sentences, then that is

how this passage should be

punctuated.

In tone, try to sound like one

human being speaking fairly

naturally to others. Try to build

bridges to the audience by using

we and us, rather than you,

which separates the speaker

from the audience. Most

important of all, aim to entertain

your audience to gain and hold

their attention.

“Trytowritethespeechyou

yourselfwouldenjoyhearing.”

One way of doing this is by

telling a joke. Jokes, however,

are dangerous. They can offend,

they can fail to make people

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laugh and they can give the

impression of a lack of

seriousness. Their success

depends on the wit of the writer

and the skill of the teller. Few

Civil Service speechwriters are

professional comedy writers and

few ministers or senior officials

are skilled comics. Gentle

humour and lightness of touch

are important elements in most

speeches but set-piece jokes are

risky. There is no silence longer

than the one following the set-

piece joke that didn’tcomeoff…

Quotations can be effective

providing they are directly

relevant, short, not too well-

known and not intellectually or

socially exclusive. Our aim in

using them is to illustrate or

illuminate our message, not to

show how clever we are.

Use the well-tried rhetorical

techniques: repetition,

alliteration, contrasts, puzzles

and solutions, and three-part

lists (see Supplement 1). These

work well subliminally on most

audiences – they please the ear

– but they fail utterly if over-

used to an extent where the

audience consciously spots the

techniques and begins to listen

out for them. You can, however,

use them far more than you

think you can before an

audience starts to notice.

“Ifyouaredescribingapolicy,

try to personalise it by

describing, in the most concrete,

practical way possible, what it

willdoforparticularpeople.”

Avoid detailed explanations,

endless statistics or complex or

abstract concepts. The audience

will not remember them in

sufficient detail. So use few

facts, put them simply and make

them memorable.

Try to bring statistics to life by

expressing them punchily. For

example, 23.84% of the people of

Luton... is much too detailed and

easily forgotten. Nearly one in

four…is an obvious way of

making the figure easier to

visualise and to remember.

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Other colourful ways of making

numbers memorable include

these sorts of devices:

That’sfourJumbojetsfullof

people every hour, every day,

every year.

That’sthewholeofWembley

Stadium every day.

That’stheentirepopulationof

Cardiff.

Most audiences are less

interested in figures than they

are in human stories. If you are

describing a policy, try to

personalise it by describing, in

the most concrete, practical way

possible, what it will do for

particular people. Real case

studies, briefly and colourfully

described, can bring abstract

policies to life and make the

speech effective, persuasive and

sometimes moving. These can be

contextualised to show how they

fit into the Government’s

broader policy and philosophy.

(See the policy model on page

18. Speeches work best in the

‘why’ part and the ‘what,for

whom’part.)

Try to end on a high note and, to

regaintheaudience’sattention

for the high spot, signal to them

in your draft that the end is

coming, about a minute before it

comes. Those you have lost will

then – we hope – tune back in

for the important bit at the end.

After drafting

Read through the draft. If you

cannot hear the words clearly in

your head, read them aloud. It

helps to do this anyway as it

gives you a clear idea of whether

all your phrases are sayable.

Put the speech away and do not

look at it again until you have

hadanight’ssleep.Thenreadit

with a fresh eye and try also to

read it aloud to a long-suffering

colleague, who will offer

constructive criticism.

It’sworthspendingtimeand

concentration on editing the

speech. You should ruthlessly cut

out:

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any errors;

any words or phrases that

are not earning their keep;

long-winded or complex

constructions; and

anythingtheaudiencewon’t

understand.

You should ensure that the

speech:

flows naturally from point to

point;

is as entertaining as

possible; and

is one minute shorter –

certainly not a second

longer – than was required.

Circulate copies to contributors,

inviting any important

amendments and then despatch

the draft to the speaker. If

possible, especially if you are

likely to draft for this speaker

again, try to attend the event to

hear your speech delivered.

Otherwise, ask for feedback on

how it went and a copy of the

final text. All of these will

provide useful pointers for next

time.

Above all, try to write the speech

you yourself would enjoy

hearing. Try, too, to enjoy

writingit.Ifyoudon’tenjoy

writing it, what hope have the

poor audience of enjoying

listening to it?

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SUPPLEMENT 1: Some examples of rhetorical devices

Repetition

In a speech, unlike in a submission, repetition is very effective for

emphasis:

If Margaret Thatcher wins –

I warn you not to be ordinary.

I warn you not to be young.

I warn you not to fall ill.

I warn you not to get old.

The Rt Hon. Neil Kinnock MP, electioneering, 1983

I have never shied away from telling the British people about the

difficult decisions we face. And just because things are getting

better,Idon’tintendtodosotoday.

Yes, the deficit is down by a third. Now in the coming year it will

be down by a half. But it is still one of the highest in the world –

so today we take further action to bring it down.

Yes,investmentandexportsareup.ButBritain’sgottwenty

years of catching up to do – so today we back businesses who

invest and export.

Yes, manufacturing is growing again, and jobs are being created

across the country. So today we support manufacturers and

back all regions of our country.

The Rt Hon George Osborne MP, House of Commons, 19 March

2014

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Variation

Variation enables you to use repetition even more, without being

dully repetitive:

I say to you today, my friends, that in spite of the difficulties and

frustrations of the moment, I still have a dream. It is a dream

deeply rooted in the American dream.

I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out

the true meaning of its creed: We hold these truths to be self-

evident: that all men are created equal. I have a dream that one

day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the

sons of former slave-owners will be able to sit down together at

a table of brotherhood. I have a dream that one day even the

state of Mississippi, a desert state, sweltering with the heat of

injustice and oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of

freedom and justice. I have a dream that my four children will

one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the

color of their skin but by the content of their character. I have a

dream today.

I have a dream that one day the state of Alabama, whose

governor’slipsarepresentlydrippingwiththewordsof

interposition and nullification, will be transformed into a

situation where little black boys and black girls will be able to

join hands with little white boys and white girls and walk

together as sisters and brothers. I have a dream today. I have a

dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, every hill and

mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made

plain, and the crooked places will be made straight, and the glory

of the Lord shall be revealed, and all flesh shall see it together.

Martin Luther King, Washington, 28 August 1963

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Contrasts

A contrast can emphasise a point starkly:

If we cannot stay here alive, then let us stay here dead.

Field Marshal Viscount Montgomery of Alamein, Egypt, August

1942

And so, my fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do

for you – ask what you can do for your country.

President John F Kennedy, Washington DC, 20 January 1961

On this day, we gather because we have chosen hope over fear,

unity of purpose over conflict and discord.

President Barack Obama, Washington DC, 20 January 2009

In shaping that future it is vital that we look to the past. Here on

the continent of Europe we saw not the war to end all wars, but

the precursor to another desperate and violent conflict just two

decades later.

The Rt Hon David Cameron MP, Military Cemetery, Mons,

4 August 2014

Alliteration

While the French used rhyme, the English oral tradition used

alliteration (words beginning with the same sound) to colour

phrases and make them memorable:

The Continent will not suffer England to be the workshop of the

world.

The Rt Hon. Benjamin Disraeli MP, House of Commons,

March 1838

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We shall not flag or fail. We shall fight in France, we shall fight on

theseasandoceans…

The Rt Hon. Winston Churchill MP, House of Commons, June 1940

This generation of soldiers, sailors, airmen, Marines, and Coast

Guardsmen have volunteered in the time of certain danger. They

are part of the finest fighting force that the world has ever

known. They have served tour after tour of duty in distant,

different, and difficult places...

President Barack Obama, Fort Hood, 10 November 2009

Lists of 3

Three seems to be a magic number for the human brain – perhaps

because we can remember three things easily. Words, phrases or

even sentences that fall into three distinct parts are often

memorable:

This is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. But it

is, perhaps, the end of the beginning.

The Rt Hon. Winston Churchill MP, Mansion House, 10 November

1940

Through talk, we tamed kings, restrained tyrants, averted

revolution.

The Rt Hon Tony Benn MP, on Parliament, 1982

Education, education, education.

TheRtHon.TonyBlairMP,listinghisparty’sprioritiesin1997

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Sequences

Sequences (yesterday, today, tomorrow; spring, summer, autumn,

winter; last week, this week, next week; every hour of every day of

every year) add rhythm, music and emphasis to a simple point. For

example:

The Tories may be the party of today.

Labour is certainly the party of yesterday.

It falls to us to be the party of tomorrow.

The Rt Hon. Paddy Ashdown MP, Liberal Democrat Party

Conference

I stand before you today the representative of a family in grief, in

a country in mourning, before a world in shock.

Earl Spencer, Westminster Abbey, 6 September 1997

Puzzles and solutions

Simply reversing the order in which one presents information can

produce a puzzle for an audience. By giving them incomplete

information (the puzzle), we arouse their curiosity and they listen

especially carefully to hear the second part (the solution) that

contains or leads to the message:

Letmetellyouaboutthewallofmyhospitalroom…

Because that was the first thing I saw after the accident and I

stared at it for the next three months.

Christopher Reeve, describing his accident and appealing for

support to help others

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I was an angel once...

Iwastenyearsoldanditwasinaschoolnativityplay…

The Rev Peter Wolfenden, Christmas Eve sermon, Gozo, 2003

Imagery

One approach to communicating abstract ideas is to draw a

comparison, analogy, metaphor or simile that associates

something new or unfamiliar with something established and

familiar. In the first example imagery is being used both

reassuringly (broad sunlit uplands) and frighteningly (new Dark

Age, made more sinister).

Hitler knows that he will have to break us in this island or lose

the war. If we can stand up to him, all Europe may be free and

the life of the world may move forward into broad sunlit

uplands. But if we fail, then the whole world, including the

United States, including all that we have known and cared for,

will sink into the abyss of a new Dark Age, made more sinister,

and perhaps more protracted, by the lights of perverted science.

The Rt Hon. Winston Churchill MP, House of Commons, June 1940

From Stettin in the Baltic to Trieste in the Adriatic an iron curtain

has descended across the Continent. Behind that line lie all the

capitals of the ancient states of Central and Eastern Europe.

Warsaw, Berlin, Prague, Vienna, Budapest, Belgrade, Bucharest

and Sofia; all these famous cities and the populations around

them lie in what I must call the Soviet sphere, and all are subject,

in one form or another, not only to Soviet influence but to a very

high and in some cases increasing measure of control from

Moscow.

The Rt Hon. Winston Churchill MP, Fulton, Missouri, 5 March 1946

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Inasensewehavecometoournation’scapitaltocashacheck.

When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words

of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they

were signing a promissory note to which every American was to

fall heir. This note was a promise that all men would be

guaranteed the inalienable rights of life, liberty, and the pursuit

of happiness. It is obvious today that America has defaulted on

this promissory note insofar as her citizens of color are

concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America

has given the Negro people a bad check which has come back

marked‘insufficientfunds.’Butwerefusetobelievethatthe

bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are

insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this

nation. So we have come to cash this check – a check that will

give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of

justice.

Martin Luther King, Washington, 28 August 1963

The Civil Service is a bit like a rusty weathercock. It moves with

opinion then it stays where it is until another wind moves it in a

different direction.

The Rt Hon Tony Benn MP, March 1995

The House of Lords is the British Outer Mongolia for retired

politicians.

The Rt Hon Tony Benn MP, New York Times, 1962

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Six years ago we suffered an unprecedented cardiac arrest in our

banks.Thiswasn’tjustarecession.Itwasashatteringcollapse

of the basic assumptions by which successive governments had

run our economy since the Big Bang.Thiswasn’tjusta

downturn. We were a nation plunged into uncertainty as the

thumping heart of our economy ground to a halt.

The Rt Non Nick Clegg MP, Party Conference, 9 March 2014

Rhetorical questions

Asking a question, then answering it, can make a logical point

powerfully:

Is man an ape or an angel? Now I am on the side of the angels.

The Rt Hon. Benjamin Disraeli MP, Oxford, 1864

When you think of the number of men in the world who hate

each other, why, when two men love each other, does the

church split?

The Rt Hon Tony Benn MP, 1989

The question most often posed is not: why does it matter? But:

why does it matter so much?...And if this House now demands,

at this moment, faced with this threat from this regime, that

British troops are pulled back, that we turn away at the point of

reckoning – and this is what it means – what then? What will

Saddam feel? Strengthened beyond measure. What will the

other states who tyrannise their people, the terrorists who

threaten our existence, what will they take from that?

That the will confronting them is decaying and feeble.

Who will celebrate and who will weep?

The Rt Hon. Tony Blair MP, House of Commons, 18 March 2003

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Lightness of touch

While structured, set-piece jokes are dangerous, gentle humour

and lightness of touch work well, especially when accompanied by

humorous self-deprecation:

I am trying to imagine what in the world I am doing here. I have

never been to Blackpool before, I had never been to the

McDonalds in Blackpool before. I like the city, I like the weather,

and I understand I may have brought it; if so I will take credit for

any good thing I can these days.

President Bill Clinton, Labour Party Conference, Blackpool,

October 2002

Thank you, Mr Chairman, for introducing me so kindly. My

father would have been proud to hear your description of me.

My mother would have believed it.

Sir Brian Wolfson, Chairman National Training Task Force,

(used often!)

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SUPPLEMENT 2: Some words and phrases to avoid in everything we

write

This list cannot be comprehensive, nor is it an attempt to ban words!

It simply highlights some commonly used words and phrases which –

because they are ugly, imprecise or simply over-used and stale –

should be avoided at every opportunity.

To access

To address

(this commits us to

doing nothing)

Agenda

(other than in a

meeting)

Appropriate

Back-burner

Ball park

Business (as an

adjective)

Committed to

Customer

To deliver

Delivery

Disseminating best

practice

To drive the business

Focussed

Framework

Going forward

To grow the business

To impact

To impact negatively

To incentivise

Iconic

Input

In the business of

Interventions

Issues around

Key (especially

key players & key

stakeholders)

Logistic

Mission statement

Narrative

An offering

To progress

To put in place

Rain check

Relevant

To role model

To roll out

(or rolling out pilots)

To secure

To seek to

To set out in

Significant

Solutions (business)

Spearhead

Strategic (unless it

really is)

To task

To touch base

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Jargon

Many of these words might be classed as jargon, but, unless we

define the word jargon (whichoriginallymeantbirdsong),itisn’tan

especially helpful label.

There are at least four different types of jargon and using it is not

always wrong. The first type, for example, is simply the vocabulary

any group of specialists uses when communicating with each

other.Whetherthey’reaccountantsspeakingtoaccountants,

doctors to doctors or stamp-collectors to stamp-collectors, they all

speak the same language and can therefore communicate in what

is sometimes called the restricted code (as opposed to the

universal code,whichweshoulduseinmixedcompany).There’s

nothing wrong with using the restricted code, providing that your

audiencespeaksitfluently.Similarly,there’snoharminusing

abbreviations or acronyms providing you are sure that your entire

audience understands them; most ministers will tell you, however,

that unfamiliar acronyms come near the very top of their hate list.

They should be used with great caution.

The second use of jargon is when pseudo-technical language is

employed to complicate or dress up a simple idea, or even to hide

thefactthatwedon’treallyunderstandwhatwe’rewritingabout.

The third is where language is used exclusively, like a tie or badge,

to show that I speak itandamthereforepartofthisclub;youdon’t

and are therefore excluded. Finally, jargon can be used to obscure,

rather than to illuminate. This use ranges from several rather naff

euphemisms to avoid using the word lavatory, to sometimes

discreet, sometimessinisterattemptstohidewhatwe’redoing

becausewedon’tlikeitorareashamedofit(downsizing, letting

you go or ethnic cleansing).

A horrible example

One reason why modern business speech is so readily satirised is

its dependence upon a very restricted vocabulary of stock words –

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A horrible example

One reason why modern business speech is so readily satirised is

its dependence upon a very restricted vocabulary of stock words –

often vague abstract nouns such as solution, intervention, passion

– and phrases that are used repeatedly to demonstrate a particular

way of thinking. It actually has the opposite effect, making those

who employ it sound unimaginative, inarticulate and identical to

each other while preventing them from communicating simply,

clearly and with precision. Sadly this robot vocabulary is also

highly infectious: it has spread from business into many other

sectors, including government. Clarity, precision and humanity are

vital to ministers and civil servants when communicating with each

other, with Parliament and, above all, with the public. This

language, which obstructs those processes, should be avoided.

We are committed to delivering, in strategic partnership with our

key stakeholders, our vision, as set out in our mission statement,

to grow the business while removing barriers that negatively

impact on delivery of our targets, and to facilitate accessing of

our enhanced customer offerings within the overarching strategic

framework we have put in place to underpin relevant processes

and procedures to disseminate appropriate best practice among

all key players.

A sentence of this kind – which is only a marginally exaggerated

version of some real examples in widespread use – conveys one of

three messages from its author. It may mean, very simply:

I have no real ideawhatI’msaying.

It may mean, less attractively:

Ithinkyou’llfallforthisnonsense.

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Or, at the very least, it means:

Youworkitout:Icouldn’tbebothered.

Writing is hard work because it obliges us to draft according to the

needs of the reader or listener. This sort of language, especially

when densely packed into sentences, takes no account of the

reader.It’sthereforenotonlyunattractiveandimprecise;it’salso

lazy, insensitive and offensive to our readers.

This is not, however, an argument for allowing our language to

stagnate.Weshouldn’thesitatetocoinnewwordsorphrases.(As

Sam Goldwyn once put it: Let’shavesomenewclichés.) All the

tired words and phrases on this list have been over-used or

misused until any freshness, clarity or life has been squeezed out

of them. Language is a living, evolving thing and, as with any living

system, the principles of Darwinism apply. Those words and

phrases that work, and provide what other words and phrases

don’t,willthrive and become a lasting part of the English language.

Those that add nothing new will soon go the way of the dodo. If we

want people to hear and remember what we say, we must find

fresh ways of saying it.

Why restrict your vocabulary to a few stale, vague and ineffective

words simply because they are widely used? The English language

has a wealth of words. Use more of them. And, if your purpose –

as it should be – isclarity,don’tbeshyofusingthelanguageyou

use at home. It may need just a touch of polish (or even cleaning

up)butit’sagoodstartingpointbecause,unlikemindless

corporate-speak, it is usually simple and effective.

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Chapter 7: Civil Service ethics in practice

…asmattersnowstand,the

Government of the country

could not be carried on without

the aid of an efficient body of

permanent officers, occupying a

position duly subordinate to that

of the Ministers, who are duly

responsible to the Crown and to

Parliament, yet possessing

sufficient independence,

character, ability and experience

to be able to advise, assist and

to some extent influence those

who are from time to time set

over them.

Northcote-Trevelyan Report,

January 1854

The modern Civil Service is built

upon six ethical principles, which

have permeated all major

documents about it since mid-

Victorian times:

integrity

accountability

objectivity

political impartiality

confidentiality

recruitment (by open

competition), promotion and

dismissal independently of

ministers.

The Civil Service Code of 1995

(revised in 2006 with minor

changes in 2010) incorporated

these broad principles into a

professional doctrine but, given its

brevity, cannot apply them to the

day-to-day problems likely to

confront serving civil servants.

This chapter makes the link

between our founding principles

andwhattoday’scivilservantsdo,

ordon’tdo,becauseofthem.

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Integrity

Although this principle is usually

given prime position among the

six, it is the one least considered

and most taken for granted both

by civil servants and by many of

those we serve. For those of us in

a service with a long tradition of

honesty, it is hard to imagine the

stultifying effect of widespread

dishonestyamonganation’s

public servants. Imagine the

disruption and unfairness caused

if one could obtain a passport only

by bribing the clerk at the

Passport Office. Imagine, too, the

effectofthisonthepublic’s

perception of their public service,

political leaders and government.

Corruption militates against

efficiency by distorting decision-

making and the allocation of

resources.

“Wedrawourauthorityfrom

ministers, ministers draw their

authority from Parliament, and

Parliament draws its authority

fromtheelectorate.”

But integrity extends beyond

simple financial probity into wider

moral values, including being

honest, resisting improper

influences, respecting confidences

and all the attributes that make

up an honourable person.

Gladstone maintained that the

British constitution presumes on

the good will of everyone in it.

Despite recent trends towards

published standards, watchdogs

and codes of conduct, this

remains true. These useful safety

checks on public service ethics can

complement, but cannot be

substitutes for, the fundamental

requirement for the highest

standards of individual integrity.

Integrity lies at the root of all

other principles, colouring civil

servants’dealingswithministers,

with each other, with external

interests and, above all, with

Parliament and the public we

serve.

Obedience to those in higher

authority is not enough. Although

part of a service which is

protected by laws, codes and

traditions, ultimately we are each

responsible for what we do, and,

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in such matters, integrity –

professional and personal –

remains our guiding star.

Accountability

The work of the Civil Service is

legitimised, democratically, by a

chain connecting us, via three

links, to the public we serve.

The first link is to ministers, who

in turn are linked to the

Parliament to which they belong.

Parliament provides the final link

to the electorate. We draw our

authority from ministers,

ministers draw their authority

from Parliament, and Parliament

draws its authority from the

electorate. Whatever professional

authority each of us may have, we

draw from this chain.

While the links in this chain hold

firm, government is legitimate. If

the chain is broken at any link,

actions in government become

illegitimate. It could be broken in

many ways: perhaps by a civil

servant misleading or lying to

ministers, or by a minister

misleading or lying to Parliament,

or even by a government deciding

to suspend or abolish general

elections.

If we believed a fellow civil

servant were misleading

ministers, or that a minister were

misleading Parliament, it would be

our duty not simply to keep our

own hands clean by avoiding

involvement, but to pursue the

matter in accordance with the

terms of the Civil Service Code.

In the still more hypothetical

example of a government

suspending or abolishing general

elections, the Service, together

with the armed services, would be

absolved from our duty to obey

that government. In such extreme

circumstances, our loyalty would

revert to the Crown in Parliament,

which represents the non-

political, permanent interests of

the nation.

The chain legitimising government

also provides the chain of

accountability, down which civil

servants, ministers and Members

of Parliament can be called to

account by the public.

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Members of the public can raise

an issue of individual or general

concern with their MP, from

whom they are

entitled to a considered response.

In turn, the MP is entitled to one

from the appropriate minister,

who is entitled to require one

from his or her civil servants. This

usually takes the form of an

exchange of letters, but individual

issues of this kind can prompt

Parliamentary Questions and even

escalate to become the subjects of

debate.

Because of its scale and

frequency, it is tempting to view

ministerial correspondence as an

administrative chore or an

exercise in customer care. It is

actually fundamental both to

public service in a modern

democracy and to one of the

ancient roles of Parliament: the

powerful accounting through

Parliament to the people. It can be

seen in practical operation in

every department and agency of

government hundreds of times

each day.

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Accountability lies at the very

heart of democracy, and

answering letters and questions

raised, via MPs or directly, by the

public we serve is accountability in

action. Similarly, in Parliamentary

Questions and debates and in

exchanges with Select

Committees, civil servants help

ministers to account to Parliament

for Government’sactions.For

policy and operations, civil

servants’soleaccountabilityto

Parliament is via our ministers,

and, even when appearing before

a Select Committee, we can

express no view other than one

representingourministers’view.

For expenditure, however, the

chain of accountability to

Parliament is direct. In each

department or agency the senior

official (whether permanent

secretary or chief executive) is

also accounting officer, whose

task is to account personally to

the Public Accounts Committee

for how the organisation has

managed and spent its budget.

Before the Public Accounts

Committee, accounting officers do

not represent ministers, but speak

for themselves. Whether

representing ministers or

ourselves, however, the

requirement imposed on us by the

principle of accountability is quite

clear: civil servants can have no

part in misleading Parliament or

the public.

Accountability is a fundamental

concept not only in the traditional

analysis of relationships between

public and Parliament, Parliament

and Government, and ministers

and civil servants, but also in

financial matters. The Public

Accounts Committee will examine

not simply the propriety of

expenditure, but also whether

value for money has been

obtained. The principles of

accountability can also be applied

simply and practically at every

level of management, helping to

clarify objectives and incentives.

When targets can be attributed

specifically to a particular

manager, there is a much greater

chance of success than where no

one has assumed responsibility for

getting the task done.

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“Fromtimetotime,weareasked

to explain or implement a

particular policy or decision with

which we may not agree. Our

privateviewsmustnotintrude.”

Objectivity

All of us as civil servants hold our

own political views. We vote in

elections and, like anyone else,

cannot help but approve or

disapprove of particular

government policies. While it

would be difficult for a vegan to

work in meat policy in the

Department of Environment, Food

and Rural Affairs or for a strict

pacifist to be part of the Ministry

of Defence, either could be

employed widely elsewhere in the

Service. The Service is large

enough to be able to

accommodate most consciences.

We are, however, required to

exclude such views from our work.

From time to time, we are asked

to explain or implement a

particular policy or decision with

which we may not agree and, on

these occasions as on others, our

private opinions must not intrude.

It is not professional, for example,

for an official in a tax office to say:

“Ithinkit’swrong,but the

Governmentsaysyoumust…” We

serve that Government and

should not criticise it publicly.

In advising ministers, although

civilservants’politicalviews

should not be sought, our

professional views will be.

Ministers are constantly being

asked to make decisions about

subjects they may know little

about. In these circumstances

they rely on their officials to

provide not only facts but advice.

That advice is of value only if it is

objective (i.e. honest, unbiased

and based firmly on the facts).

Sometimes it may not be what

ministers would like to hear.

Historically, advisers to people in

supreme executive power have

been allowed some licence to

advise fearlessly, irrespective of

what their chiefs may have

wanted to hear: to speak truth

unto power. Appointing William

Cecil as her Principal Secretary in

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1558, Queen Elizabeth I summed

this up:

This judgment I have of you: that

you will be faithful to the state,

that you will not be corrupted by

any manner of gift and that,

without respect of my private will,

you will give me that counsel that

you think best.

Ministers understand this and

expect, and usually welcome,

advice – even if it is unpalatable.

Effective ministers recognise that

unpalatable advice now is

preferable to discovering the

pitfalls of a policy the hard way

later on! Civil servants may see

that the direct route to a

minister’spolicyobjectivemay

crossaminefield.It’sourdutyto

warn about such minefields and

we’redoingministersnofavours

by not warning them. Because this

can sound negative or even

obstructive, having issued our

warning, we should wherever

possible recommend an

alternative route that attains their

objective while avoiding the

mines.

There need be no conflict

between giving objective advice

and the enthusiastic prosecution

ofaminister’spolicy:theyare

simply two different stages in the

policy process. Until the minister

has been properly briefed about

the pros and cons of various

options, our task is to advise

objectively; once the minister has

been acquainted with the options

and consequences, and a decision

has been made, it is our job to

implement it efficiently. A very

experienced Cabinet Minister and

Leader of the Opposition, The Rt

Hon. Michael Howard QC MP,

encompassed this distinction in

four words, which form a robust

and reassuring motto:

Advise fearlessly.

Implement loyally.

Political impartiality

Policy civil servants inhabit a

profoundly political world. The

ministers we serve are politicians,

the policies we devise, design and

implement are usually politically

driven (often originating in a party

manifesto), the environment in

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which they are debated is the

political forum of Parliament, and

the media through which they are

publicised are also deeply

political. Speeches, replies to

letters or Parliamentary Questions

or lines to take, all usually drafted

by civil servants, are intrinsically

political, reflecting the political

philosophy of the present

Government. Engaged in what is

often a political process, working

for political masters in a political

environment, we cannot function

effectively without sensitive

political antennae. To describe the

Civil Service as a-political or non-

political (common, shorthand

descriptions) is therefore

misleading.

TheCivilService’spositionis

inherently partisan. It does not

exist to serve political parties

even-handedly; it serves only the

duly elected government. This is

understood by Government and

Opposition, but the Opposition

must also believe that, whatever

the Civil Service is doing for the

current Government, it will do for

their party, when elected. This is

the essence of impartiality: the

Civil Service’scapacitytoserve

any duly elected government and

our capacity to maintain the trust

oftheOpposition,‘the

Governmentinwaiting’,thatwe

remain unpoliticised.

The maintenance of this trust

itself places constraints on what

we can and cannot do for current

ministers. For example, it would

be harder to maintain that trust if

the Service engaged in writing

material openly critical of the

Opposition and their policies.

“Policycivilservantsinhabita

profoundlypoliticalworld.”

Here special advisers have a

helpful role to play, drafting for

ministers material that

professional civil servants would

regard as party political. However,

neither temporary, quasi-political

special advisers nor permanent

civil servants have any role to play

in drafting material designed to

distort the truth or to mislead

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either the public or Parliament.

When drafting for ministers, civil

servants should therefore take

pains to avoid writing material

that is either party political or in

any way misleading. Questions on

these issues should, where

necessary, be taken to the highest

level as outlined in the Civil

Service Code. (See Appendix 1.)

Civil servants owe to ministers in a

coalition government the same

duty they owe to those in single-

party governments. The working

relationship is unchanged. When,

however, the Coalition

Government was formed in 2010,

it was recognised that

relationships within the

Government would on occasion

beaffectedbyministers’

allegiances to different parties. To

tackle this potential problem it

was agreed that, if parties within

the Coalition agreed to disagree

on particular policies and

suspended the requirement for

collective agreement, any

statementsoneachparty’s

position would be drafted

politically and not by civil

servants. The Civil Service would

provide factual advice to ministers

of both parties and, if asked to do

so, should treat that advice as

confidential.

Confidentiality

Although the extent of

government secrecy is always a

contentious subject, in any system

of government there will always

be some areas that must remain

confidential. The Freedom of

Information Act 2000 created two

statutory rights: to be told that

information is held and to have

that information supplied. The Act

specifies two types of exemptions:

qualified exemptions and absolute

exemptions. Qualified exemptions

are based on a public interest test.

When we are considering whether

information may be released, we

must weigh the public interest in

disclosure against the public

interest in applying the

exemption. Absolute exemptions

require no such public interest

test. The Act lists the types of

information found in each type of

exemption. Under the Act

ministers and officials may have to

provide internal documents and

128 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

communications (including e-

mails) for public examination. It is

therefore more important than

ever that everything we write, as

well as what we say, is

professional in content and tone.

Ministers must feel able to trust

officials to respect their legitimate

confidences. While individual civil

servants may have their own

views in particular circumstances

aboutthepublic’srighttoknow,

and may choose privately to

advise ministers accordingly, we

have no authority to gainsay a

minister who is acting legally,

constitutionally and honestly. In

these circumstances the matter is

simply one of political judgement,

in which ministers must always

prevail because they are the

electorate’sdemocraticchoice,

which we are not. If we feel that

ministers or officials are

suppressing or distorting

information illegally,

unconstitutionally or unethically,

we have a duty to raise the matter

internally in accordance with the

terms of the Civil Service Code.

Whatever the circumstances, civil

servants should not act

unilaterally as self-appointed

judges of the public good by

releasing information illicitly.

Apart from being constitutionally

indefensible and often illegal, it is

also less effective than legitimate

action.

An example of this dates from

1985, when a senior civil servant

in the Ministry of Defence,

believing that his minister

intended to mislead Parliament in

reply to a Parliamentary Question,

sent secret information

anonymously to the MP who had

asked the question. Partly as a

result of this incident, the

Treasury and Civil Service Select

Committee recommended the

adoption of a Civil Service Code,

establishing for civil servants an

appeals procedure beyond the

Service itself on matters of this

kind. In this particular case,

however, the existing procedure –

referral to the Head of the Home

Civil Service – was discounted in

favour of leaking to an Opposition

MP. Although subsequently the

civil servant was acquitted of

breaking the Official Secrets Act,

this was undoubtedly a breach of

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confidentiality. His choice to leak,

rather than to pursue his concern

more properly, led to an

unproductive, political fracas and

a highly publicised dismissal and

criminal trial, rather than to a

clear resolution of the

fundamental question: whether or

not Parliament was being misled.

Transparency

During the last twenty years

increasing emphasis has been

placed upon the need for

openness and transparency in

government. This has thrown

more light on the identity, role

and activities of civil servants who

previously would have remained

unrecognised, supporting actors in

the Whitehall drama. This

includes the publication of factual

information, including the

payment of salaries and expenses,

but the trend also encourages the

media and political observers to

speculate on the private opinions

of civil servants. This can make

civil servants’appearancesbefore

Select Committees (when they

explaintheGovernment’spolicy)

an even more testing experience.

Recruitment, promotion and

dismissal independently of

ministers

In the belief that the continuance

of a professional, politically

impartial Civil Service required a

professional independence from

ministers, and wishing to put an

end to nepotism in appointments,

the Civil Service Commission was

established to oversee and

manage recruitment. The principle

of open competition by an

independent body thus precluded

ministerial interference in

appointments, eliminating

placemen while promoting merit.

TheindependentService’srolein

managing its promotion and

dismissals procedures meanwhile

helped to preserve the principles

of objectivity and impartiality.

“Ministersandtheirprivate

secretaries therefore often forge

close working relationships, based

on trust, efficiency and

temperament, but seldom, if ever,

onpolitics.”

130 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

The devolution of personnel

policies to departments and

agencies, the privatisation of

Recruitment and Assessment

Services and overt ministerial

interest in some high-profile

incidents of recruitment and

dismissal each caused concern

about the survival of these

principles. The dismissal of the

Chief Executive of the Prisons

Service in 1995, the departure of

many senior information officers

from across government after

1997, and, in 2002, the departure

of the Department of Transport,

Local Government and the

Regions’Directorof

Communications all caused

anxiety.

In November 2010 concern arose

following the appointment to the

Civil Service of a photographer

and a film-maker, both of whom

had previously been employed by

the Conservative Party. Both

were rapidly withdrawn from their

positions in government and

returned to restricted political

roles.

From time to time the press have

made much of ministers,

reshuffled from one department

to another, taking their private

secretaries with them, citing this

as an example of politicisation and

ministerial interference. Anyone

who has worked in or around a

minister’sprivateoffice

recognises this as nonsense. In a

highly pressured job of that kind,

effective teams form quickly and

are invaluable. Ministers and their

private secretaries therefore often

forge close working relationships,

based on trust, efficiency and

temperament, but seldom, if ever,

on politics. Most ministers will not

knowtheirprivatesecretaries’

political views, which are simply

irrelevant to the role and

relationship. In these

circumstances it is understandable

and hardly serious political

interference if a minister asks to

take a private secretary to the

new department. It is, however,

an appointment to be decided and

approved by the departments

concerned and not a ministerial

gift.

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Appointments in the Service

remain a matter for an interview

panel operating under the

auspices of the Civil Service

Commission whose task is to

ensure that the process is

conducted on merit on the basis

of fair and open competition.

Traditionally, ministers played no

part in appointments beyond

perhaps privately expressing their

views to the permanent secretary.

Since April 2014, however, the

recruitment principles established

by the Commission have allowed

ministers to play a part in

particular appointments in which

they have an interest.

The new rules surrounding such

cases allow ministers:

to agree the final job and

person specification, the

terms of the advertisement

and the composition of the

selection panel to ensure that

there is sufficient challenge

from outside the Service;

to be kept in touch with the

progress of the competition

and to give the selection

panel their views;

to meet (accompanied by a

representative of the

Commission) each of the

short-listed candidates and to

inform the panel of any issues

the minister would like to be

tested at interview.

When the appointments panel has

recommended a candidate for

appointment, a minister may ask

the panel to reconsider its

decision. If, in the light of the

minister’sobjection,thepanel

decides to revise its decision, the

reason for this must be recorded

and the change of decision must

be approved by the Board of the

Civil Service Commission. In the

case of appointments as heads of

departments (i.e. permanent

secretaries), this same process is

followed only if an objection is

made by the Prime Minister.

Inevitably ministers will find some

civil servants congenial, others

less so. The relationship is,

however, a professional one and

should – and usually does –

transcend matters of such limited

importance. Where relationships

132 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

between ministers and civil

servants go wrong, it is for the

permanent secretary to

investigate how and why this has

happened. He or she will need to

consider, for example, whether

the civil servant has been

incompetent or obstructive,

whether either the civil servant or

the minister has given avoidable

offence, whether the minister has

interpreted objective advice as

obstruction, or whether it is a

simple case of incompatible

temperaments.

Any resulting action should be

dictated neither by the desire to

placate ministers nor by the wish

to protect them from unpalatable

advice, but should be directed at

ensuring the fair treatment of all

concerned, while maintaining the

CivilService’straditional

independence in matters of

appointment, promotion and

dismissal.

Conclusion

While reflecting on the longevity

of these ethical principles, mainly

established in the nineteenth

century, it is worth considering

one omission from the list. It

seems extraordinary, given

Victorian attitudes, that the word

obedience was excluded and that

the quality of independence was

stressed. While it is the duty of

civil servants to obey legitimate

instructions from ministers, the

Victorians recognised that, in

advisers, a propensity to obey

without question does not lead to

good government. The path of

unquestioning obedience leads

instead to poor advice, ill-

conceived policies and the

disintegration of the principles on

which the Civil Service was, and

remains, founded.

“TheVictoriansrecognisedthat,in

advisers, a propensity to obey

without question does not lead to

goodgovernment.”

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As civil servants, our duty is not

simply to follow these principles,

but to act as their custodians. On

a day-to-day level, there is no one

else to guard them. Parliament is

a distant, interested observer of

government whose role precludes

involvement in the day-to-day

operation of the principles that

guideus.Ministers’livesarea

complex web of demands and

loyalties involving constituency,

party, Cabinet, Parliament and the

department. It is not their role to

oversee the professional ethics of

those who serve them.

Indeed, ministers – especially

those new to government –

should look to their senior civil

servants for advice on how the

machine operates and how they

can use it to best effect: which

levers to pull and which they

should not pull. (See Appendix 2.)

It falls, therefore, to those of us in

the Service not only to observe

and to demonstrate, but also to

guard and to preserve, the

principles that have guided

generations of our colleagues

since the nineteenth century.

Appendix 1:

The Civil Service Code

Civil Service values

1. The statutory basis for the

management of the Civil

Service is set out in Part 1 of

the Constitutional Reform

and Governance Act 2010.

2. The Civil Service is an integral

and key part of the

government of the United

Kingdom

. It supports the

Government of the day in

developing and

implementing its policies,

and in delivering public

services.

Civil servants working for the

Scottish Executive and the Welsh

Assembly Government, and their

Agencies, have their own versions of

the Code. Similar Codes apply to the

Northern Ireland Civil Service and

the Diplomatic Service. Civil servants

working in Non Ministerial

Departments in England, Scotland

and Wales are covered by this Code.

Civil servants are accountable

to Ministers

, who in turn are

accountable to Parliament

3. As a civil servant, you are

appointed on merit on the

basis of fair and open

competition and are

expected to carry out your

role with dedication and a

commitment to the Civil

Service and its core values:

integrity, honesty, objectivity

and impartiality.

4 Some civil servants are

accountable to the office holder in

charge of their organisation. This is

made clear in terms and conditions

of employment.

5 Civil servants advising Ministers

should be aware of the

constitutional significance of

Parliament, and of the conventions

governing the relationship between

Parliament and the Government.

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A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 135

4. In this Code:

‘integrity’isputtingthe

obligations of public service

above your own personal

interests;

‘honesty’isbeingtruthful

and open;

‘objectivity’is basing your

advice and decisions on

rigorous analysis of the

evidence; and

‘impartiality’isactingsolely

according to the merits of

the case and serving equally

well Governments of

different political

persuasions.

5. These core values support

good government and ensure

the achievement of the

highest possible standards in

all that the Civil Service does.

This in turn helps the Civil

Service to gain and retain the

respect of Ministers,

Parliament, the public and its

customers.

6. This Code

sets out the

standards of behaviour

expected of you and other

civil servants. These are

based on the core values

which are set out in

legislation. Individual

departments may also have

their own separate mission

and values statements based

on the core values, including

the standards of behaviour

expected of you when you

deal with your colleagues.

The respective responsibilities

placed on ministers and special

advisers in relation to the Civil

Service are set out in their Codes of

Conduct: www.cabinetoffice.gov.uk/

propriety_and_ethics.

Special advisers are also covered by

this Civil Service Code except, in

recognition of their specific role, the

requirements for objectivity and

impartiality (paras 11–16).

136 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

Standards of behaviour

Integrity

7. You must:

fulfil your duties and

obligations responsibly;

always act in a way that is

professional

and that

deserves and retains the

confidence of all those with

whom you have dealings

;

carry out your fiduciary

obligations responsibly (that

is make sure public money

and other resources are used

properly and efficiently);

deal with the public and their

affairs fairly, efficiently,

promptly, effectively and

sensitively, to the best of

your ability;

Including taking account of ethical

standards governing particular

professions.

Including a particular recognition

of the importance of cooperation

and mutual respect between civil

servants working for the UK

Government and the devolved

administrations and vice-versa.

keep accurate official records

and handle information as

openly as possible within the

legal framework; and

comply with the law and

uphold the administration of

justice.

8. You must not:

misuse your official position,

for example by using

information acquired in the

course of your official duties

to further your private

interests or those of others;

accept gifts or hospitality or

receive other benefits from

anyone which might

reasonably be seen to

compromise your personal

judgement or integrity; or

disclose official information

without authority. This duty

continues to apply after you

leave the Civil Service.

A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 137

Honesty

9. You must:

set out the facts and relevant

issues truthfully, and correct

any errors as soon as

possible; and

use resources only for the

authorised public purposes

for which they are provided.

10. You must not:

deceive or knowingly mislead

Ministers, Parliament or

others; or

be influenced by improper

pressures from others or the

prospect of personal gain.

Objectivity

11. You must:

provide information and

advice, including advice to

Ministers, on the basis of the

evidence, and accurately

present the options and

facts;

take decisions on the merits

of the case; and

take due account of expert

and professional advice.

12. You must not:

ignore inconvenient facts or

relevant considerations when

providing advice or making

decisions; or

frustrate the implementation

of policies once decisions are

taken by declining to take, or

abstaining from, action which

flows from those decisions.

Impartiality

13. You must:

carry out your responsibilities

in a way that is fair, just and

equitable and reflects the

Civil Service commitment to

equality and diversity.

14. You must not:

act in a way that unjustifiably

favours or discriminates

against particular individuals

or interests.

138 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

Political Impartiality

15. You must:

serve the Government

whatever its political

persuasion, to the best of

your ability in a way which

maintains political

impartiality and is in line with

the requirements of this

Code, no matter what your

own political beliefs are;

act in a way which deserves

and retains the confidence of

Ministers, while at the same

time ensuring that you will be

able to establish the same

relationship with those

whom you may be required

to serve in some future

Government; and

comply with any restrictions

that have been laid down on

your political activities.

Some civil servants are accountable

to the office holder in charge of their

organisation. This is made clear in

terms and conditions of

employment.

16. You must not:

act in a way that is

determined by party political

considerations, or use official

resources for party political

purposes; or

allow your personal political

views to determine any

advice you give or your

actions.

Rights and responsibilities

17. Your department or agency

has a duty to make you

aware of this Code and its

values. If you believe that

you are being required to act

in a way which conflicts with

this Code, your department

or agency must consider your

concern, and make sure that

you are not penalised for

raising it.

18. If you have a concern, you

should start by talking to

your line manager or

someone else in your line

management chain. If for any

reason you would find this

difficult, you should raise the

matter with your

A HANDBOOK ON ADVISING, BRIEFING & DRAFTING 139

department’snominated

officers who have been

appointed to advise staff on

the Code.

19. If you become aware of

actions by others which you

believe conflict with this

Code you should report this

to your line manager or

someone else in your line

management chain;

alternatively you may wish to

seek advice from your

nominated officer. You

should report evidence of

criminal or unlawful activity

to the police or other

appropriate regulatory

authorities. This Code does

not cover HR management

issues.

20. If you have raised a matter

covered in paragraphs 16 to

18, in accordance with the

relevant procedures

, and

The whistleblowing legislation (the

Public Interest Disclosure Act 1998)

may also apply in some

circumstances.

do not receive what you

consider to be a reasonable

response, you may report the

matter to the Civil Service

Commission

. The

Commission will also

consider taking a complaint

direct. Its address is:

3rd Floor,

35 Great Smith Street,

London

SW1P 3BQ

Tel: 020 7276 2613

info@civilservicecommission.org.uk

The Directory of Civil Service

Guidance and the Civil Service

Management Code give more

information:

www.cabinetoffice.gov.uk /conduct-

ethics/civil-service.aspx

TheCivilServiceCommission’s

Guide to Bringing a Complaint gives

more information, available on the

Commission’swebsite:

www.civilservicecommission.org.uk

140 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

If the matter cannot be resolved

using the procedures set out

above, and you feel you cannot

carry out the instructions you

have been given, you will have to

resign from the Civil Service.

21. This Code is part of the

contractual relationship between

you and your employer. It sets

out the high standards of

behaviour expected of you which

follow from your position in

public and national life as a civil

servant. You can take pride in

living up to these values.

November 2010

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Appendix 2:

Extracts from the

Ministerial Code

Ministers of the Crown

1.1 Ministers of the Crown

are expected to behave in a way

that upholds the highest

standards of propriety.

1.2 The Ministerial Code

should be read alongside the

Coalition agreement and the

background of the overarching

duty on Ministers to comply with

the law including international

law and treaty obligations and to

uphold the administration of

justice and to protect the

integrity of public life. They are

expected to observe the Seven

Principles of Public Life, and the

following principles of

Ministerial conduct:

a) The principle of collective

responsibility, save where it

is explicitly set aside, applies

to all Government Ministers;

b) Ministers have a duty to

Parliament to account, and

be held to account, for the

policies, decisions and

actions of their departments

and agencies;

c) It is of paramount

importance that Ministers

give accurate and truthful

information to Parliament,

correcting any inadvertent

error at the earliest

opportunity. Ministers who

knowingly mislead

Parliament will be expected

to offer their resignation to

the Prime Minister;

d) Ministers should be as open

as possible with Parliament

and the public, refusing to

provide information only

when disclosure would not

be in the public interest

which should be decided in

accordance with the relevant

statutes and the Freedom of

Information Act 2000;

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e) Ministers should similarly

require civil servants who

give evidence before

Parliamentary Committees

on their behalf and under

their direction to be as

helpful as possible in

providing accurate, truthful

and full information in

accordance with the duties

and responsibilities of civil

servants as set out in the Civil

Service Code;

f) Ministers must ensure that

no conflict arises, or appears

to arise, between their public

duties and their private

interests;

g) Ministers should not accept

any gift or hospitality which

might, or might reasonably

appear to, compromise their

judgement or place them

under an improper

obligation;

h) Ministers in the House of

Commons must keep

separate their roles as

Minister and constituency

Member;

i) Ministers must not use

government resources for

Party political purposes; and

j) Ministers must uphold the

political impartiality of the

civil service and not ask civil

servants to act in any way

which would conflict with the

Civil Service Code as set out

in the Constitutional Reform

and Governance Act 2010.

Ministers and the Government

2.1 The principle of

collective responsibility, save

where it is explicitly set aside,

requires that Ministers should be

able to express their views

frankly in the expectation that

they can argue freely in private

while maintaining a united front

when decisions have been

reached. This in turn requires

that the privacy of opinions

expressed in Cabinet and

Ministerial Committees,

including in correspondence,

should be maintained.

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Ministers and appointments

3.1 Ministers have a duty to

ensure that influence over civil

service and public appointments

is not abused for partisan

purposes. Civil Service

appointments must be made in

accordance with the

requirements of the

Constitutional Reform and

Governance Act 2010 and the

CivilServiceCommissioners’

Recruitment Principles. Public

appointments should be made in

accordance with the

requirements of the law and,

where appropriate, the Code of

Practice issued by the

Commissioner for Public

Appointments.

Special Advisers

3.2 With the exception of

the Prime Minister and the

Deputy Prime Minister, Cabinet

Ministers may each appoint up

to two special advisers (paid or

unpaid). The Prime Minister may

also authorise the appointment

of one special adviser by

Ministers who regularly attend

Cabinet. Where a Minister has

additional responsibility

additional advisers may be

allowed.

All appointments, including

exceptions to this rule, require

the prior written approval of the

Prime Minister, and no

commitments to make such

appointments should be entered

into in the absence of such

approval. All special advisers will

be appointed under terms and

conditions set out in the Model

Contract for Special Advisers and

the Code of Conduct for Special

Advisers.

3.3 All special advisers must

uphold their responsibility to the

Government as a whole, not just

their appointing Minister. The

responsibility for the

management and conduct of

special advisers, including

discipline, rests with the Minister

who made the appointment.

Individual Ministers will be

accountable to the Prime

Minister, Parliament and the

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public for their actions and

decisions in respect of their

special advisers. It is, of course,

also open to the Prime Minister

to terminate employment by

withdrawing his consent to an

individual appointment.

3.4 The Government will

publish an annual statement to

Parliament setting out the

numbers, names and paybands

of special advisers, the

appointing Minister and the

overall paybill.

Ministers and their departments

4.1 The Prime Minister is

responsible for the overall

organisation of the executive

and the allocation of functions

between Ministers in charge of

departments.

Ministers outside the Cabinet

4.2 The Minister in charge

of a department is solely

accountable to Parliament for

the exercise of the powers on

which the administration of that

department depends. The

Minister’sauthoritymay,

however, be delegated to a

Minister of State, a

Parliamentary Secretary, or to an

official. It is desirable that

Ministers in charge should

devolve to their junior Ministers

responsibility for a defined range

of departmental work,

particularly in connection with

Parliament.AMinister’s

proposal for the assignment of

duties to junior Ministers,

together with any proposed

“courtesytitles”descriptiveof

their duties should be agreed in

writing with the Prime Minister,

copied to the Cabinet Secretary.

4.3 Ministers of State and

Parliamentary Secretaries will be

authorised to supervise the day-

to-day administration of a

defined range of subjects. This

arrangement does not relieve

the Permanent Secretary of

general responsibility for the

organisation and discipline of the

department or of the duty to

advise on matters of policy. The

Permanent Secretary is not

subject to the directions of

junior Ministers. Equally, junior

Ministers are not subject to the

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directions of the Permanent

Secretary. Any conflict of view

between the two can be

resolved only by reference to the

Minister in charge of the

department.

Ministers and civil servants

5.1 Ministers must uphold

the political impartiality of the

Civil Service, and not ask civil

servants to act in any way which

would conflict with the Civil

Service Code and the

requirements of the

Constitutional Reform and

Governance Act 2010.

5.2 Ministers have a duty to give

fair consideration and due

weight to informed and impartial

advice from civil servants, as well

as to other considerations and

advice in reaching policy

decisions, and should have

regard to the Principles of

Scientific Advice to Government.

The role of the accounting officer

5.3 Heads of departments

and the chief executives of

executive agencies are

appointed as Accounting

Officers. This is a personal

responsibility for the propriety

and regularity of the public

finances for which he or she is

responsible; for keeping proper

accounts; for the avoidance of

waste and extravagance; and for

the efficient and effective use of

resources. Accounting Officers

answer personally to the

Committee of Public Accounts on

these matters, within the

framework of Ministerial

accountability to Parliament for

the policies, actions and conduct

of their departments.

5.4 Accounting Officers

have a particular responsibility

to see that appropriate advice is

tendered to Ministers on all

matters of financial propriety

and regularity and more broadly

as to all considerations of

prudent and economical

administration, efficiency and

effectiveness and value for

money. If a Minister in charge of

a department is contemplating a

course of action which would

146 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

involve a transaction which the

Accounting Officer considers

would breach the requirements

of propriety or regularity, the

Accounting Officer will set out in

writing his or her objections to

the proposal, the reasons for the

objection and the duty to inform

the Comptroller and Auditor

General should the advice be

overruled.

5.5 If the Minister decides

nonetheless to proceed, the

Accounting Officer will seek a

written instruction to take the

action in question. The

Accounting Officer is obliged to

comply with the instructions and

send relevant papers to the

Comptroller and Auditor

General. A similar procedure

applies where the Accounting

Officer has concerns about

whether a proposed course of

action offers value for money.

This notification process enables

the Committee of Public

Accounts to see that the

Accounting Officer does not bear

personal responsibility for the

actions concerned.

Ministers’constituencyand

party interests

6.1 Facilities provided to

Ministers at Government

expense to enable them to carry

out their official duties should

not be used for Party or

constituency work.

Ministers’privateinterests

7.1 Ministers must ensure

that no conflict arises, or could

reasonably be perceived to arise,

between their public duties and

their private interests, financial

or otherwise.

7.2 It is the personal

responsibility of each Minister to

decide whether and what action

is needed to avoid a conflict or

the perception of a conflict,

taking account of advice

received from their Permanent

Secretary and the independent

adviseronMinisters’interests.

Ministers and the

presentation of policy

8.1 Official facilities paid for

out of public funds can be used

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for Government publicity and

advertising but may not be used

for the dissemination of material

which is essentially party

political. The conventions

governing the work of the

Government Communication

Network are set out in the

Government Communication

Network’sProprietyGuidance–

Guidance on Government

Communications.

Media interviews, speeches, etc.

8.2 In order to ensure the

effective coordination of Cabinet

business, the policy content and

timing of all major

announcements, speeches, press

releases and new policy

initiatives should, where

possible, be cleared in draft with

the No. 10 Press and Private

Offices 24 hours in advance. All

major interviews and media

appearances, both print and

broadcast, should also be agreed

with the No. 10 Press Office.

8.3 In all cases [other than

those described in paragraph 6.6

of the full document], the

principle of collective

responsibility applies (see also

paragraph 2.1). Ministers should

ensure that their statements are

consistent with collective

Government policy. Ministers

should take special care in

referring to subjects which are

the responsibility of other

Ministers.

8.4 Ministers must only use

official machinery for distributing

texts of speeches relating to

Government business. Speeches

made in a party political context

must be distributed through the

Party machinery.

8.5 Ministers invited to

broadcast on radio, television

and/or webcasts in a political or

private capacity should consider

if such a broadcast would have a

bearing on another

department’sresponsibilities,in

which case they should clear the

matter with the ministerial

colleague concerned before

agreeing to the invitation.

148 WORKING WITH MINISTERS

Ministers and Parliament

9.1 When Parliament is in

session, the most important

announcements of Government

policy should be made in the first

instance, in Parliament.

Timing and form of

announcement

9.2 Even when Government

announcements are not of major

importance their timing may

require careful consideration in

order to avoid clashes with other

Government publications,

statements or announcements

or with planned Parliamentary

business. The Offices of the

Leader of the Commons, the

Chief Whip, the Deputy Prime

Minister and the Prime Minister

should be given as long an

opportunity as possible to

comment on all important

announcements.

9.3 Every effort should be

made to avoid leaving significant

announcements to the last day

before a recess.

Select Committee Reports

9.4 Any Minister or

Parliamentary Private Secretary

who receives a copy of a Select

Committee report in advance of

publication excluding copies sent

to departments at the

Confidential Final Revise stage

should make no use of them and

should return them without

delay to the Clerk of the relevant

Committee. Civil servants,

including special advisers, are

also covered by this ruling.

Travel by ministers

10.1 Ministers must ensure

that they always make efficient

and cost-effective travel

arrangements. Official transport

should not normally be used for

travel arrangements arising from

Party or private business, except

where this is justified on security

grounds.

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Appendix 3:

Extracts from the

Code of Conduct

for Special

Advisers

1. The employment of

special advisers adds a political

dimension to the advice and

assistance available to Ministers

while reinforcing the political

impartiality of the permanent

Civil Service by distinguishing the

source of political advice and

support.

2. Special advisers are

employed to help Ministers on

matters where the work of

Government and the work of the

Government Party overlap and

where it would be inappropriate

for permanent civil servants to

become involved. They are

appointed to serve the

Government as a whole and not

just their appointing Minister.

They are an additional resource

for the Minister providing

assistance from a standpoint

that is more politically

committed and politically aware

than would be available to a

Minister from the permanent

Civil Service.

3. The sorts of work a

special adviser may do if their

Minister wants it are:

i. reviewing papers going to the

Minister, drawing attention

to any aspect which they

think has party political

implications, and ensuring

that sensitive political points

are handled properly. They

may give assistance on any

aspect of departmental

business, and give advice to

their Minister when the latter

is taking part in party political

activities;

ii. "devilling" for the Minister,

and checking facts and

research findings from a

party political viewpoint;

iii. preparing speculative policy

papers which can generate

long-term policy thinking

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within the Department,

including policies which

reflect the political viewpoint

of the Minister’s Party;

iv. contributing to policy

planning within the

Department, including ideas

which extend the existing

range of options available to

the Minister with a political

viewpoint in mind;

v. liaising with the Party, to

ensure that the Department's

own policy reviews and

analysis take full advantage

of ideas from the Party, and

encouraging presentational

activities by the Party which

contribute to the

Government's and

Department's objectives;

vi. helping to brief Party MPs

and officials on issues of

Government policy;

vii. liaising with outside interest

groups including groups with

a political allegiance to assist

the Minister's access to their

contribution;

viii. speechwriting and related

research, including adding

party political content to

material prepared by

permanent civil servants;

ix. representing the views of

their Minister to the media

including a Party viewpoint,

where they have been

authorised by the Minister to

do so;

x. providing expert advice as a

specialist in a particular field;

xi. attending Party functions

(although they may not speak

publicly at the Party

Conference) and maintaining

contact with Party members;

and

xii. taking part in policy reviews

organised by the Party, or

officially in conjunction with

it, for the purpose of

ensuring that those

undertaking the review are

fully aware of the

Government's views and

their Minister's thinking and

policy.

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Relations with the Permanent

Civil Service

7. In order to provide

effective assistance to Ministers,

special advisers should work

closely with the ministerial team

and with permanent civil

servants, and establish

relationships of confidence and

trust. Special advisers may, on

behalf of their Ministers:

i. conveytoofficialsMinisters’

views and work priorities,

including on issues of

presentation. In doing so,

they must take account of

civilservants’workloadsand

any priorities Ministers have

set;

ii. request officials to prepare

and provide information and

data, including internal

analyses and papers;

iii. hold meetings with officials

to discuss the advice being

put to Ministers.

But special advisers must not:

iv. ask civil servants to do

anything which is

inconsistent with their

obligations under the Civil

Service Code;

v. behave towards permanent

civil servants in a way which

would be inconsistent with

the standards set by the

employing department for

conduct generally;

vi. authorise the expenditure of

public funds, have

responsibility for budgets, or

any involvement in the award

of external contracts;

vii. exercise any power in

relation to the management

of any part of the Civil Service

(except in relation to another

special adviser);

viii. otherwise exercise any

statutory or prerogative

power;

ix. suppress or supplant the

advice being prepared for

Ministers by permanent civil

servants although they may

comment on such advice.

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8. Where any permanent

Civil Servant has concerns about

any request coming from a

special adviser, they should

discuss that concern with their

line manager, the special adviser

concerned,theMinister’s

Principal Private Secretary or

their Permanent Secretary. If a

civil servant feels for whatever

reason that he or she is unable

to do this then they may wish to

raise the concern with

departmental nominated

officer(s) within the department

or direct with the Cabinet

Secretary or the Civil Service

Commissioners.

9. In order to enable

special advisers to work

effectively, departments may

allocate permanent civil servants

to provide support of a non-

political nature. Special advisers

should not be involved in issues

affecting a permanent civil

servant’s career such as

recruitment, promotion, reward

and discipline, though their

views may be sought as an input

to performance appraisals

provided these are written by

permanent civil servants.

Contacts with the media

10. Special advisers are able

torepresentMinisters’ views on

Government policy to the media

with a degree of political

commitment that would not be

possible for the permanent Civil

Service. Briefing on purely party

political matters must be

handled by the Party machine.

11. All contacts with the

news media should be

authorised by the appointing

Minister and be conducted in

accordance with the

Government Communication

Network’s‘ProprietyGuidance–

Guidance on Government

Communications’.

12. Special advisers must

not take public part in political

controversy whether in speeches

or letters to the Press, or in

books, articles or leaflets; must

observe discretion and express

comment with moderation and

would not normally speak in

public for their Minister or the

Department.

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Annex A:

Ministerial Code:

The Seven Principles

of Public Life

Selflessness

Holders of public office should

act solely in terms of the public

interest. They should not do so

in order to gain financial or other

material benefits for themselves,

their family, or their friends.

Integrity

Holders of public office should

not place themselves under any

financial or other obligation to

outside individuals or

organisations that might seek to

influence them in the

performance of their official

duties.

Objectivity

In carrying out public business,

including making public

appointments, awarding

contracts, or recommending

individuals for rewards and

benefits, holders of public office

should make choices on merit.

Accountability

Holders of public office are

accountable for their decisions

and actions to the public and

must submit themselves to

whatever scrutiny is appropriate

to their office.

Openness

Holders of public office should

be as open as possible about all

the decisions and actions that

they take. They should give

reasons for their decisions and

restrict information only when

the wider public interest clearly

demands.

Honesty

Holders of public office have a

duty to declare any private

interests relating to their public

duties and to take steps to

resolve any conflicts arising in a

way that protects the public

interest.

Leadership

Holders of public office should

promote and support these

principles by leadership and

example.

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Index

Abbreviations and acronyms 44, 116

Impartiality 125-137

Accountability 121-3, 153

Independence 129-33

andministers’letters56

Information-giving brief 52

and Parliamentary Questions 72

Integrity 120-1, 153

Accounting Officer 123

Jargon and management-speak 115-18

Background Notes

toministers’letters65

Language 44-5, 115-18

to Parliamentary Questions 73

restricted and universal codes 116

Briefing 38-55

rhetorical devices 106-14

categories and formats 41, 52-5

useful phrases 67-9

how to brief orally 46-8

Leaking information 128-9

information-giving brief 52

Letters, ministerial 56-69

lines to take and question & answer 49

Lines to take 49

meetings brief 54-5

Lords, Questions in House of 90-4

submissions 41, 52-3

Media 13-15

Checking and correcting 22

Meetings brief 54-5

Civil Service Code

Members of Parliament

25, 76, 119, 121, 127, 128, 134

letters 60

Coalition government, effects of

why they ask PQs 71-2

11, 15, 53, 127

Ministerial Code 141-8

Code of Conduct for Special Advisers

Ministers

27, 143, 149

and Cabinet 15-16

Commons, Questions in House of 82-90

and correspondence 56-69

Confidentiality 127-9

and Parliament 13

Contributions to drafts 61-62, 99-100

and the media 13-15

Correspondence, ministerial 56-69

and the party 11

and their constituents 12

Disproportionate cost 78

characteristics 19-20

deciding policy 22-25

Ethics, Civil Service 119-34

how to brief 38-55

presenting policy 25-27

Guidance on Drafting Answers to PQs 80

ranks of 16

red boxes 20, 35, 36

Honesty 137, 153

view of the world (diagram) 10

what civil servants want from 29

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Misleading

Political content

Ministers 121, 123

and special advisers 126-7

Parliament 121, 123

in letters 64

Political impartiality 125-7

Named Day Questions 82, 85

Press Office 12, 14-15, 28, 31, 33

Northcote-Trevelyan Report 119

PrimeMinister’sQuestions88-89

Principal Private Secretary 31, 152

Objectivity 124, 137, 153

Principles of Public Life 153

Openness, 76, 129, 153

Private Notice Questions 84, 92

Opposition, HM 20, 26, 126

Private Office 30-7

Oral briefing 46-8

Public Accounts Committee

Oral Parliamentary Questions 74-6

123, 145, 146

Parliament

Queen, letters to HM The 59

and ministers 13

Question and answer briefs 49

Members of 60, 71-2

Questions, Parliamentary

modes of address 77

See Parliamentary Questions

Parliamentary Questions 70-94

background notes 73

Red box 20, 35, 36

disproportionate cost 78

Red pen 22

grouping 87-8

Rhetorical devices 106-14

Guidance on Drafting Answers 80

holding answers 77

Select Committees

Named Day 82, 85

13, 123, 128, 129, 148

openness in answering 81

Selflessness 154

Oral Questions 74-6

Seven Principles of Public Life 154

PrimeMinister’sQuestions88-9

Special Advisers (SpAds) 12, 14, 27-9,

Private Notice Questions 84, 92

31, 33, 35, 126-7, 143-4, 149-53

procedure in Commons 82-90

Code of Conduct for 27, 143, 149

procedure in Lords 90-4

Speeches 95-118

Questions for Short Debate 93

Standard letters 63

Supplementary 70

Submissions 41, 52-3

Unstarred 93-4

Urgent 78

Technical language 115-18

why they are asked 71-2

Treat Officially letters 57, 59

Written Questions 74

Permanent Secretary

Unstarred questions 93-4

10, 28, 37, 123, 131-2, 144-5, 146

Urgent questions 78

Policy

deciding 22-5

Written Parliamentary Questions 74

presenting 25-7

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